I like it, Ben. I like the blown out section in the center. Reminds me of something you would see in a magazine or brochure for a migraine medication. LOL! Good Luck!
Good focus on the subjects right eye but the image seems overexposed to me. The lack of focus on the left eye makes me believe that your model is, indeed, dreaming.
Hi Ben :) I think you chose a good orientation for this photo and I also think it makes a good stock shot... I think it could be enhanced a bit by toning it in a cool color range to support the 'dreaming' theme... good work :) - setzler