There is no focal point, its very active and yet has not movement, dynamism or direction. you need better lines and placement to move through the picture. Look at the frescos in you picture, look at the sculpture, they will show you how to use negative space and movement.
Dislike the angle...The top of the photo, which is cropped out is much more interesting and contrasting than the words of which the focus is on. Since you cant read the entire word why include it? Besides in the bottom right corner you have some detailing that does nothing for the picture so why leave it in? -5-
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