Greetings from the Critique Club!
This is a fun, whimsical entry and reminds me to an extent of  Samantha_T. Check out her work and you'll see what I mean! The composition is very well done, with the nice realistic colours on mini-you instantly drawing the eye, then the eye following your gaze to the flower. Great that you got the shadows of your hat and flower correct, also good choicee of a car interior for a bg as it is both matte and quite neutral.
The few changes I would make is perhaps a bit of dodge on the face, as it's already partly hidden by the hat, so it's getting a little lost and not quite matching the rest of the skin tones visible. And I would have ensured that the feet cleared the line of the dash and wiper blade by just a teeny bit more, to draw more attention to you.
Overall a fun and well-done entry, keep up the good work!
Feel free to PM me with any questions,
Susan |
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