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02/06/2003 05:34:50 PM |
Greetings from the Critique Club :)
Squares are definitely dominant in this photo. There is no doubt about meeting the challenge at all.
For some reason, the exposure on this shot is a litle flat. The colors are not popping out, and there are some nice colors here to work with. I think maybe the combination of lighting you described in your description is playing a role in that as well. Even though you fired your flash, the lighting is quite even. I don't see any resulting harsh shadows that I would normally expect from a closeup flash shot. Maybe you have an external flash that you bounced or something?
Compositionally, the image is a bit 'busy' for me. There is no good resting point for my eyes in this image. As I look at the image, my eyes keep wandering around and they don't really come to rest at any given point. There is a lot here to absorb and no real single focal point for the viewer...
Keep up the good work :) The 717 is a great cam and I'm sure it won't let you down!
John Setzler
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02/02/2003 04:54:04 PM |
| Meet the challenge. Good shot. |
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02/02/2003 09:04:29 AM |
| Too much stuff. More stuff doesn't make it more better. I appreciate what you are trying to do, but it doesn't really work for me - inspzil |
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02/01/2003 11:52:34 PM |
| Creative, very creative. Well photographed also. Neat idea. Nice one. |
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01/31/2003 01:48:36 PM |
| I like how the objects in this photo give it deminsion. |
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01/31/2003 08:04:20 AM |
| great idea to meet challenge. to improve, increase the amount of light used. |
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01/31/2003 01:03:47 AM |
| Something seems to be wrong with the light. I can not put my finger on it. What does your histogram say about it??? |
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01/30/2003 08:48:02 PM |
| That's alot of squares! Good job on that side. The picture seems to lack focus. I still like it. Good luck. Jacko. |
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01/30/2003 06:38:07 PM |
| good idea but a little too busy. a solid color floor may help. |
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01/30/2003 04:43:48 PM |
| This a very cool idea of all the different games. And it really does look like it was organized well and not just thrown together. Very good job! |
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01/28/2003 10:17:42 PM |
stick to one of those next time
we got way too much going on |
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01/28/2003 07:21:54 PM |
| I like the idea but it looks too busy |
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01/28/2003 12:19:57 PM |
| I like the picture -- would prefer to see it brighter. |
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01/28/2003 06:12:25 AM |
| That's good! I don't think I can find all the sqaure stuff like this. Well done! |
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01/27/2003 03:29:24 PM |
lots of squares here very good
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01/27/2003 10:55:36 AM |
| So square!! ;-) Nice capture, good DOF and great concept... Cub |
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01/27/2003 09:15:56 AM |
| good idea, but these primary colors could have been more vibrant if the picture was brighter... |
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01/27/2003 07:46:59 AM |
| Maybe sometimes less is more? |
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01/27/2003 06:48:19 AM |
| This is a wonderful idea! Adjust the colour balance after you shoot to really make the whites pop and i'm sure your image will improve 8 |
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01/27/2003 02:14:23 AM |
| I don't know what the "four", "four" means on the left, but the rest of the picture is awesome! I love all the squares everywhere! Nice. One thing, I'd prefer to see this a little lighter (more exposure) which would given more impact to it. 8. |
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