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11/08/2004 08:12:06 PM |
Howdy from the CC!
This shot has an interesting composition, good focus, and nice lighting (although a polarizer might help bring out the blue in the sky). If it were in a different challenge, it would probably do fine...but in the Poverty challenge, I agree with some of the previous commenters that it's just difficult to discern the poverty aspect without knowing the story behind the photo. I think that having the person actually being in the shot would make a huge difference.
All that being said, I think the shot is an interesting landscape study with both positive attributes and points upon which improvements can be made. Have fun and keep shooting! :o)
Laurie
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11/02/2004 09:46:52 PM |
| i'd crop it differently and probably wouldn't waited for a sunset/sunrise to get some more shadows, but good comp. |
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11/02/2004 12:44:58 PM |
| Does someone live under here? if so, it's not clear. Nice composition on the subject, but i don't get the connection to poverty |
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11/01/2004 10:28:23 AM |
| Is there someone living under that overlook? Seeing him/her would have made this a believable photo. Right now it's just a photo of the overlook. |
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10/31/2004 03:08:09 PM |
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10/31/2004 02:57:33 PM |
| Not sure a photo of a deck evokes poverty for me. However as a photograph you have got a good compositional balance, and some sharp focusing |
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10/31/2004 02:41:12 AM |
the challenge is poverty right?
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10/30/2004 06:54:18 PM |
| Um... poverty. yeah. ok. Are there people living under that thing? Sorry just don't get this on any level. It's probably me though. |
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10/30/2004 05:06:09 AM |
| i dont see hanging clothes or any signs of person living here. |
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10/29/2004 01:47:53 PM |
| verry nice texture and color. Would have done better in if some one was actually in the "home" |
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10/29/2004 06:34:50 AM |
| It would be more impessive if you had someone dressed as a tramp lounging around but I get your interpretation |
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10/28/2004 01:21:04 PM |
| I think it would have done better in B&W becouse now it looks too bright and joyfull. |
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10/27/2004 06:43:11 PM |
| I think it would be better if there was evidence supporting the title. |
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10/27/2004 02:06:23 PM |
| what does this have to do with poverty? |
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10/27/2004 10:30:51 AM |
| This just dosen't say "poverty" to me. |
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10/27/2004 01:07:46 AM |
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