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			|  | 04/28/2002 10:34:00 PM | 
		| | Transit?  Transition?  Nah. | 
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			|  | 04/28/2002 11:23:00 AM | 
		| | I think you're midway between two effects -- an image with a wide range of grey tones and a silhouette shot of the bus and the sign.  Playing with the exposure to push it one way or the other might have yielded a picture with a higher impact. | 
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			|  | 04/28/2002 06:16:00 AM | 
		| | wish there had been some darker tones in this. | 
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			|  | 04/27/2002 10:54:00 AM | 
		| | the balck and white sky comes out really well. | 
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			|  | 04/27/2002 10:50:00 AM | 
		| | I like the black and white for this shot. | 
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			|  | 04/26/2002 09:01:00 PM | 
		| | good photojournalism. the flare and haze in the lens and the weird angle on the bus give it a faded nostalgic quality.  interesting image. | 
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			|  | 04/24/2002 05:19:00 PM | 
		| | Not sure that this shot is well served by B&W.  And the dark thing in the upper right corner is a bit distracting. | 
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			|  | 04/23/2002 08:15:00 PM | 
		| | Play on words here?  --transit~transition--  Would have been better if the bus wasn't so cropped.  The sky is nice looking, but, as I found to be the case in my submission, its a bit distracting | 
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			|  | 04/23/2002 06:03:00 PM | 
		| | Very well done. I especially like the black and white effect. You have a very creative eye! :) | 
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			|  | 04/23/2002 05:50:00 PM | 
		| | I think the sky is pushing everything else into underexposure, and it isn't all that interesting. | 
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			|  | 04/23/2002 01:11:00 PM | 
		| | neds some contrast work -- also kind of misted/foggy in places like your lens may need cleaning | 
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			|  | 04/23/2002 09:52:00 AM | 
		| | yep it fits challenge - framing a little off | 
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			|  | 04/23/2002 08:49:00 AM | 
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			|  | 04/22/2002 08:09:00 PM | 
		| | don't understand the transition, seems like there was some sort of smog in the way of your shot also | 
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			|  | 04/22/2002 04:50:00 PM | 
		| | Black and whites should have both.  This has neither just gray. | 
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			|  | 04/22/2002 02:00:00 PM | 
		| | Nice Shot!  I love the black and white.  I think a little more exposure would have brightened the bus up a little, eh?  :)  Good job! | 
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			|  | 04/22/2002 01:19:00 PM | 
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			|  | 04/22/2002 08:58:00 AM | 
		| | Good shot, although maybe crop an inch off the top. | 
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			|  | 04/22/2002 08:32:00 AM | 
		| | Angle cuts off too much of the bus and shows too much of the sky. | 
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			|  | 04/22/2002 07:43:00 AM | 
		| | framing could have been a bit lower, to get the whole bus and loose some sky.  Background seems cluttered | 
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			|  | 04/22/2002 01:59:00 AM | 
		| | I would have loved the added interest of someone getting on or off the bus. | 
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			|  | 04/22/2002 01:11:00 AM | 
		| | The idea of moving on to a new chapter in life also came to me.  I would have chosen a Greyhound or a moving van instead of a local transit bus to bring the message home.  Without the title, the picture by itself is a weak message. | 
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