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04/28/2002 10:34:00 PM |
| Transit? Transition? Nah. |
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04/28/2002 11:23:00 AM |
| I think you're midway between two effects -- an image with a wide range of grey tones and a silhouette shot of the bus and the sign. Playing with the exposure to push it one way or the other might have yielded a picture with a higher impact. |
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04/28/2002 06:16:00 AM |
| wish there had been some darker tones in this. |
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04/27/2002 10:54:00 AM |
| the balck and white sky comes out really well. |
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04/27/2002 10:50:00 AM |
| I like the black and white for this shot. |
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04/26/2002 09:01:00 PM |
| good photojournalism. the flare and haze in the lens and the weird angle on the bus give it a faded nostalgic quality. interesting image. |
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04/24/2002 05:19:00 PM |
| Not sure that this shot is well served by B&W. And the dark thing in the upper right corner is a bit distracting. |
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04/23/2002 08:15:00 PM |
| Play on words here? --transit~transition-- Would have been better if the bus wasn't so cropped. The sky is nice looking, but, as I found to be the case in my submission, its a bit distracting |
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04/23/2002 06:03:00 PM |
| Very well done. I especially like the black and white effect. You have a very creative eye! :) |
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04/23/2002 05:50:00 PM |
| I think the sky is pushing everything else into underexposure, and it isn't all that interesting. |
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04/23/2002 01:11:00 PM |
| neds some contrast work -- also kind of misted/foggy in places like your lens may need cleaning |
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04/23/2002 09:52:00 AM |
| yep it fits challenge - framing a little off |
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04/23/2002 08:49:00 AM |
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04/22/2002 08:09:00 PM |
| don't understand the transition, seems like there was some sort of smog in the way of your shot also |
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04/22/2002 04:50:00 PM |
| Black and whites should have both. This has neither just gray. |
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04/22/2002 02:00:00 PM |
| Nice Shot! I love the black and white. I think a little more exposure would have brightened the bus up a little, eh? :) Good job! |
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04/22/2002 01:19:00 PM |
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04/22/2002 10:23:00 AM |
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04/22/2002 08:58:00 AM |
| Good shot, although maybe crop an inch off the top. |
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04/22/2002 08:32:00 AM |
| Angle cuts off too much of the bus and shows too much of the sky. |
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04/22/2002 07:43:00 AM |
| framing could have been a bit lower, to get the whole bus and loose some sky. Background seems cluttered |
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04/22/2002 01:59:00 AM |
| I would have loved the added interest of someone getting on or off the bus. |
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04/22/2002 01:11:00 AM |
| The idea of moving on to a new chapter in life also came to me. I would have chosen a Greyhound or a moving van instead of a local transit bus to bring the message home. Without the title, the picture by itself is a weak message. |
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