Nice subject(s) and processing resembles of a Polaroid shot.
Having said that, i would have:
- Cropped the distracting negative space from above. This would have the added bonus of making the image more-or-less Polaroid aspect ratio.
- Added a Polaroid style white border
- (maybe) Asked the model to tuck in her right (camera left) leg so it doesn't get chopped off.
Interesting shot I found myself looking at the background, it looks like alphabet soup splashed against the wall which detracted from the shot but somehow made me keep looking, so in an wieird way it held my interest.
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