taken at my work.
this is a clean room in Micron Israel.
many Thx to all my friends that participated.
taken with tripod and remote.
used exposed time of 1/2sec, flash towards up and asked my friends to moove heads down during shooting..
PP:coverted from raw,adjusted curves,black and white,selective color,crop and USM.
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Place: 5 out of 26 Avg (all users): 6.5614 Avg (commenters): 7.4000 Avg (participants): 6.3889 Avg (non-participants): 6.5817 Views since voting: 1566 Views during voting: 522 Votes: 171 Comments: 19 Favorites: 0
My initial thought is that I really like the concept, and composition. I think black and white was a good choice.
If I was to think of things that might have held this back from finishing higher, for me, it would be 2 things. Something about the b&w tones seems to be lacking, maybe a little more punch to the whites? Secondly, the heads of the others in the shot is bothersome to me. I was trying to envision what I thought I might like better. Maybe if everyones head was slightly more blurry, moving side to side instead of just looking down. Or perhaps everyone but you turned backward. These are just nit picky things though, as is demonstrated by the score. Congrats on the HM!
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