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ytshuva


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Challenge: Self Portrait In A Crowd (Advanced Editing VII)
Camera: Canon EOS-5D Mark II
Lens: Canon EF 24-70mm f/2.8L USM
Location: at work
Date: Feb 18, 2013
Aperture: 9.0
ISO: 100
Shutter: 0.4
Date Uploaded: Feb 18, 2013

taken at my work.
this is a clean room in Micron Israel.
many Thx to all my friends that participated.
taken with tripod and remote.
used exposed time of 1/2sec, flash towards up and asked my friends to moove heads down during shooting..
PP:coverted from raw,adjusted curves,black and white,selective color,crop and USM.

Statistics
Place: 5 out of 26
Avg (all users): 6.5614
Avg (commenters): 7.4000
Avg (participants): 6.3889
Avg (non-participants): 6.5817
Views since voting: 896
Views during voting: 522
Votes: 171
Comments: 19
Favorites: 0


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03/04/2013 10:25:09 AM
Hello from the Critique Club :)

My initial thought is that I really like the concept, and composition. I think black and white was a good choice.

If I was to think of things that might have held this back from finishing higher, for me, it would be 2 things. Something about the b&w tones seems to be lacking, maybe a little more punch to the whites? Secondly, the heads of the others in the shot is bothersome to me. I was trying to envision what I thought I might like better. Maybe if everyones head was slightly more blurry, moving side to side instead of just looking down. Or perhaps everyone but you turned backward. These are just nit picky things though, as is demonstrated by the score. Congrats on the HM!

Jason
02/27/2013 11:33:21 AM
LOVE this shot! Very Andromeda Strain, 60's sci-fi. Congrats on the HM
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02/27/2013 09:59:11 AM
Congrats on the new personal best - love this shot!
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 Comments Made During the Challenge
02/26/2013 11:58:36 PM
Fun shot. Great idea for a group photo.
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02/26/2013 07:31:51 PM
Put your mask on! A clean environment.
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02/26/2013 09:54:50 AM
Can't tell if the motion blur helps or hurts. Think I'd prefer it if everyone was sharp but looking down. Or even looking down with their eyes closed.

Either way, this is one of the better ones in the bunch.
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02/26/2013 04:39:18 AM
I presume you are the one in focus? Well done
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02/25/2013 05:12:13 PM
Very cool. Nicely done.
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02/25/2013 08:48:30 AM
This is a great concept and I like the way you've got your arms around them.
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02/24/2013 02:08:27 PM
Nice shot
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02/23/2013 01:59:15 AM
Like this isolation of you. Guessing slow shutter and you instructing the team members to move a little. Nicely accomplished.
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02/22/2013 03:27:25 PM
What great sports to help you with your picture! I love it! Well done!
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02/22/2013 03:12:59 PM
It's very creepy how so many of them are looking down.
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02/22/2013 12:41:48 PM
There's one in every crowd. Looks like a team I'd want to meet up with:) 7
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02/22/2013 12:36:16 PM
I feel like I'm watching something from a happy version of "Silkwood." LOL :)
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02/21/2013 01:23:49 PM
Top 3
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02/21/2013 11:59:06 AM
great just contaminated the clean room :)
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02/20/2013 04:53:06 PM
Well done! Love it that you're the only one really looking and in focus.


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02/20/2013 02:29:38 AM
The fashion Police are on their way :)
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