I like the expression, the lighting, the setting. Wish there wasn't quite as much space between him and the window but this gets a very good score from me anyway. Voted earlier.
I like this but there isn't a lot of definition between the skin tones and the wall color. There is also a very slight green tint around the window which is probably the result of the green window pane. Overall a good effort - just needed a little more "thoguht" to pull off.