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07/24/2012 08:43:38 PM |
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07/24/2012 03:37:47 PM |
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07/23/2012 04:23:25 PM |
| In judging this challenge I don't ask "Does this photo make me want to eat this?" I ask "Would I want to hang this on my wall?" Your image works well in that regard. You have a good balance of light and dark and do a good job of capturing the textures of the different parts of the subject, such as the moistness of the frosting. The shadows make pleasing shapes, |
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07/22/2012 08:34:06 PM |
Voted earlier coming back to comment.
I am very curious to see how a black & white of a dessert will do. Making the food shot as a B&W makes it a harder challenge to the photographer to make it visually appealing that one would want to reach in and take a bite. Without the rich brown tones this black & white chocolate just doesn't make the mouth water with anticipation of taste. The overhead shot is an angle that doesn't do this dessert justice for it lacks a defining shape. Is it a cupcake or a muffin top or maybe a brownie baked in a muffin pan? The decoration (?) laying flat on the table hints that it might be a cupcake but if I look directly at the dessert I can't quite tell with a 100% accuracy - show it off at a different angle where the shape is more defined and I think it might be more visually appealing to a larger audience. |
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07/22/2012 06:10:55 AM |
| Looks nice, although I miss the chocolate feeling here. (missing the color) |
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07/21/2012 10:06:27 PM |
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07/21/2012 06:25:21 PM |
| B&W may not have been a great choice on this one, it makes it hard to tell what it is and does not look all that appetizing to me 5 |
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07/20/2012 02:32:14 PM |
| Amongst all the lovely color shots a BW does not convey the lusciousness of dessert. |
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07/20/2012 07:40:33 AM |
This is a tough challenge to vote. I'm torn between "what are you trying to do here" and "what do I expect here". Further complicating matters is the question "what would I do here".
What I would expect would be a technically strong piece of eye-candy that would present the dessert in a way that I would want to at least sample it, if not order it. Along these lines I'm looking at technicals: backgrounds, distracting elements, exposure, sharpness. I'm also looking for creativity, imagination, and originality, which can make up for less than perfect technicals.
So, where does this leave me with your image?
Nice idea, but could use a little work. The exposure is a little imbalanced (not enough detail in the shadows to compensate for the strong highlights). Also, personally, I'm not a fan of bw food shots; I feel they rob their subjects. |
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07/18/2012 11:48:18 PM |
| on my monitor this appears very sharp and the grain commands too much attention |
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