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01/10/2003 10:07:23 PM |
Greetings from the Critique Club,
I like this composition and I think it fits the Travel Theme very well. I especially like how the lines of the door, and floor in the lower left, all converge to the subject -- the luggage. The luggage handle in the up position also works well, as it runs parallel to the lines of the door. (And gives the feeling that the traveler will be leaving very soon....)
I wish the focus were better on the luggage. Black and white works well here, but I might like to see more contrast -- would this photograph have more impact if the door were solid white?
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01/05/2003 01:13:43 PM |
this photo is awesome. straight awesome.
represents that point of travel where you're
glad to have gone, but you're ready to go home. |
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01/05/2003 01:18:52 AM |
| MIssing focus, light and contrast to my humble point of view |
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01/02/2003 06:41:05 PM |
| The choise of name might give this image some exitement, otherwise it's quite boring. |
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01/02/2003 02:17:05 AM |
| You've captured the mood of the last day of the travel. I like it. - z |
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