| Author | Thread |
|
|
05/16/2012 12:51:52 PM |
Greetings from the Critique Club!
The bokeh here is indeed very pretty, and the comp is OK - I like that she is looking to the left and you've given her the room to do so - but this image finished where it did for a reason. It's a snapshot of a mannequin in a store. Camera shake is evident, and choosing to shoot wide open at a very slow shutter speed, with even a fast lens will not help.
Ryan, I feel it's time that you stepped out of your comfort zone in all senses of the word. You need to learn your camera, your glass's capabilities, learn a lot more about composition, play around with angles, and pay a whole lot more attention to a challenge description if you want to do well on this site.
As always, feel free to PM me.
Susan
Message edited by author 2012-05-16 13:12:33. |
|
Comments Made During the Challenge  |
|
|
05/09/2012 08:20:10 PM |
| I like the bokeh and reflections. |
|
 Photographer found comment helpful. |
|
|
05/04/2012 10:24:14 AM |
| Sorry, I don't see anything abstract and I don't see any people - manikin yes, but people no. I like the image, but totally DNMC IMHO. |
|
Home -
Challenges -
Community -
League -
Photos -
Cameras -
Lenses -
Learn -
Help -
Terms of Use -
Privacy -
Top ^
DPChallenge, and website content and design, Copyright © 2001-2025 Challenging Technologies, LLC.
All digital photo copyrights belong to the photographers and may not be used without permission.
Current Server Time: 05/12/2025 05:17:10 PM EDT.
Add photograph to your favorites
Add photographer to your favorites
