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06/03/2006 11:34:04 AM · #1 |
Took these the other day. I would appreciate any comments and will try and return them 1-4-1. Many thanks in advance!
  
   
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06/03/2006 12:17:44 PM · #2 |
| Left you comments on each. I didnt mention the lighting or exposure - or composition in any as they are all well done. Just mentioned which poses I liked and which I didnt care for and why. |
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06/03/2006 12:25:29 PM · #3 |
They all look good. Seeing a slight WB issue in most of them to the warm side. A quick levels adjustment could clear that up for ya.
Here's one with a really quick levels adjustment.
Message edited by author 2006-06-03 12:29:38.
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06/03/2006 12:36:03 PM · #4 |
nice work. seems to be a tad discoloured in some shots, as fotomann mentioned.
some of the poses feel a little 'forced' ... like the model was trying really hard to impress the camera. but a nice model and overall very clean and effective photos.
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06/06/2006 08:16:43 PM · #5 |
Super pics. Just a couple of thoughts.
First, I feel like the background color hurts the impact of the shots, because it is so close to the model's skin color. As a result she sort of blends in, and on some of the shots she is back-lit a little too strongly.
I don't care for the pink top she's wearing in one series. It bunches up and wrinkles in ways that are not flattering to her figure. |
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06/08/2006 06:59:55 PM · #6 |
I like you photos mate, dont know what I could say to improve or become critical.
She is apretty Girl and the type of photo you have shown, kind of shows she is modeling the clothes she is whearing.
I bet you could do her the power of justice with a nice relaxed portrait of herself.
Is this your studio you are using as it looks like a
canny set up.
Cheers.
Joe |
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