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09/04/2005 04:26:46 PM · #1 |
Thank you to everyone that commented on my nudeIII entry. After reading all of the comments and suggestions, My loving wife decided to give it another go. Please look at the before and after images and let me know if you see any improvements.
Thanks
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09/04/2005 04:31:58 PM · #2 |
I didn't vote this one David but you have certainly taken the comments on board well, great improvement,looks much better balanced and focussed, lovely lady , well done.
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09/04/2005 04:39:39 PM · #3 |
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09/04/2005 04:40:06 PM · #4 |
That looks great and your wife must be a good sport :)
When I suggested this challenge to my wife she said, 'Kiss my a**e!'
I said I would rather take a photo??
She said, 'Your photo will show everyone a region where the sun don't shine! And it won't involve me!'
I took that as a NO...
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09/04/2005 04:40:08 PM · #5 |
second one is a major improvement over the first, well done
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09/04/2005 04:41:49 PM · #6 |
| First, congrats for having such a loving relationship. I like this one much better. Her pose is better especially her head, it's focus is on her face and you got rid of any distractions. good job. |
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09/04/2005 04:45:39 PM · #7 |
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09/04/2005 04:54:25 PM · #8 |
This attempt is indeed much better than the first.
In your initial submission, my eyes were drawn to a portion of the blanket located adjacent to her right hand. In this version, you have elimimated all of the previous distractions and have a much better focus on the subject.
I would however suggest that perhaps you consider removing the foot that seems to be growing out of left shoulder.
Overall,,,,,,,you did a marvelous job.
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09/04/2005 11:52:13 PM · #9 |
Thanks to everyone for your kind comments. They are very helpful.
I hope to take the lessons learned here and apply them to other photo shoots. Redoing this photo while considering all of your comments helped me to see things differently thru the camera. |
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09/05/2005 12:04:04 AM · #10 |
| Excellent! The focus has moved to her face now! Much better! What a sport your wife is! Well done to both of you! |
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09/05/2005 12:06:13 AM · #11 |
| I love the new focus, it really brings her out. Excellent job! |
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09/05/2005 12:57:13 AM · #12 |
Really nice job :-) The focal point is really good in the new version.
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09/05/2005 01:04:39 AM · #13 |
Updated version is an improvement - nice job.
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