Obselete Transportation- or: Give me my Flying Cars!
by Miah

Comment:
The lighting here is a bit harsh to fully realize (what I believe) you were trying to achieve here. Earlier or later in day the light would be more cooperative giving you more control. I like the compositoin, but the light is just too harsh for GOOD b/w contrasts.
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Air Time
by Mark

Comment:
For this type of shot IMHO you need more OR less motion blur on the car. You also need LOTS MORE light. The colors are dull and background is not white. Did you use two pieces of background material? There is a line up and down about a quarter of the shot in from right. Things like this can really harm a shot that is set up as this one is. Or in other words, the more control YOU have over the environment, the more PERFECT the shot has to be to be recieved well at this site.
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Parked on the beach
by Jeanseb

Comment:
IMHO the sun draws away from the vehicle. Or is that the effect you were shooting for? I like the reflections of the sunset, but believe that if you angled out slightly to get rid of the sun...
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TRANSPORT TO THE PAST
by basia03

Comment:
This looks to be a little overexposed. Nice composition. Colors are a little blown out.
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evening on the edge
by pcody

Comment:
I'm not real sure what I'm looking at. This needs some point of reference. Is it tile? A beach of some sort? I don't know and am confused.
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Water & Ice
by oskar

Comment:
I\'m not sure I like how quickly your eye is whisked through this shot... I think it need a little more of reference points to make it more effective IMHO Definatly interesting though!
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My Aquarium
by train

Comment:
A more interesting angle and composition would serve to give this shot more interest value.
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Barely Dry
by dirtkahuna

Comment:
Don't see no water...
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Morning Surf
by Jeileen

Comment:
A more interesting angle would make this work much better. Try getting close to the ground!
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water water
by jbruno1397

Comment:
I tried a shot similar to this once and couldn't even get this much of a shower affect. I believe that you need enormous amounts of light to make this work. Did you use a flash or an outside litesource or both? Nice try. If you get one to come out real good I wanna see it!
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