"the waiting"
by kundimansabuwan

Comment:
Beautiful lighting and fine composition. Initially I thought the negative space was a bit excessive, but now I see that you are right. I'll need to up the vote a bit...;)

Eternal Struggle Between Mother and Daughter
by SherwinJames

Comment:
A very, very nice shot! A bit more light on Mother's face, perhaps. Comp, BG, focus - OK. But those expressions are priceless! Bet you are having fun together...

Friends
by Miep

Comment:
Yes! I wouldn't want to change a thing. The colour scheme is stunning. My choice for blue.

Sidewalk Beers
by ashepp

Comment:
Assuming this is candid, I love the attitude of the guys! As a portrait - well...

Me and Myself
by MortenBP

Comment:
Good idea, adequate technical execution. Myself's intense stare has the feel of intentionally ignoring Me, though. I think it could have been a nice, unexpected twist, if Myself had been watching Me instead...

no viable alternatives
by kkzoli

Comment:
Inspiring, I find myself interpreting what's going on, thanks to the gesture and expressions. I think a step or two to the left would have been beneficial, both to reduce the impact of the collar on the right guy, and to improve focus on the left one.

Solicitude
by kiwiness

Comment:
This would have been a very nice image, but for the highlighting of the noses. I find my attention drawn to them, unable to properly appreciate the rest...

Master and apprentice
by fredandaud

Comment:
Lots of interesting action and details, but not quite what I would expect from a portrait.

Mother and son
by friiskiwi

Comment:
The crop is rather unconventional, to the point of no longer working. I could accept the top of his head gone, but cutting her face was unfortunate. A Freudian thing...?

ahhhhhhhh (stretch)
by greebra

Comment:
The sunrays are interesting. However, I think you should have waited a couple of minutes, to let the sun set further, Maybe you'd have lost the rays, but the sky wouldn't be as blown out, perhaps with a nich red hue instead.
A bit of fill flash might have been good.
But if you wanted to stick with this, you could have done more in PP (provided you have the SW, of course). Adding some contrast with Curves springs to mind (to reduce the haze), followed by some tweaking with Shadows and Highlights, perhaps.