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| 01/29/2009 08:36:54 AM |
Under the Pier San Francisco 1951by TajhadComment: This really captures a sense of the sparkling play of light in a place expected to be dark. Dynamic range handled well, and just enugh deviation from symmetry for sustained interest. |
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| 01/24/2009 09:50:07 AM |
#1by ralphComment: Love the expression, sharpness, and general composition, and agree with others that avoiding overprocessing is a big plus here. You have a lovely daughter and captured the moment well. I think the background does pull the eye away from the girl. Not the upper part of the wall, which is indistinct enough to add interest without being distracting (and the color tone there is a nice echo of her shirt). The booth seat has an interesting pattern that does not need to be blurred, but the yellow-green fights with the blue shirt and her eyes, and the magenta/orange elements are too similar to elements in her face. Please don't exaggerate these thoughts into negative comments, as the image is excellent.
If you are using Photoshop, consider as an experiment using a hue-saturation layer for desaturating the greens and yellows about 1/2, then desaturate all colors a bit more, with a broadly feathered mask to protect her eyes, face, and shirt from the desaturations. Then it is easy to adjust the layer opacity so just enough background color remains to be interesting without being distracting. (I took the liberty of trying that and concluded that complete black and white conversion of background looks too contrived, but toning it down keeps a natural feel while allowing the eye to more comfortably study her face). I am no expert at this, and tastes vary, but wanted to pass along the thought. Thanks for allowing us to appreciate the image. |
| 01/17/2009 05:44:39 PM |
The Familyby bauerfan71Comment: Nice lines and lighting. Love all the sense of purity, which could be perfect if done over without the diaper. 7. |
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| 01/17/2009 05:38:45 PM |
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| 01/17/2009 05:37:28 PM |
Velvet Staghornby sherpetComment: I like the macro approach, with detail near the edge of the contrast between orange tones and yellow-greens. |
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| 01/17/2009 05:36:28 PM |
Sleepy'sby muur88Comment: Love the juxtaposition. With the person being far from horizontal, consider a portrait crop to remove the For Rent sign, but keep a good part of that intersting red door. |
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| 01/17/2009 05:34:04 PM |
Pelican ACTION !!!by andrewtComment: Sharp while retaining huge sense of motion. Needs to be in a photography textbook as a great example of "freezing" motion to put emphasis on it. Tones balance well, and this dynamic image keeps the eye busy for a long time. |
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| 01/17/2009 05:30:29 PM |
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| 01/17/2009 05:29:06 PM |
Etherealby QartComment: Simplicity of white fabric and hidden hair, purity of light, and complexity of lipstick. Excellent image. |
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| 01/17/2009 05:22:45 PM |
STRIKEFORCEby scooter97Comment: These acrobatic teams really look good flying inverted.:) Well, if this really is an instance of the "invert" adjustment, it is one of the best I have seen and one I enjoy more than usual. |
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