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Reunion
12/04/2007 01:19:39 PM
Reunion
by EBJones

Comment:
Very emotional. Nice job!
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Head and shoulders above the rest
12/04/2007 01:17:44 PM
In Every Hallway
12/04/2007 01:14:40 PM
In Every Hallway2nd Place
by JeniY

Comment:
Great dramatization! You can feel her loneliness! Nice job! This gets a 9 from me.
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Defiance
12/04/2007 01:04:37 PM
Defiance
by juliedancer116

Comment:
Nice creativity and composition! I'm giving it a 10!
Falling into loneliness (of being the only young one)
12/04/2007 01:01:17 PM
Falling into loneliness (of being the only young one)
by FocusPoint

Comment:
WOW! This photo got me! Nice composition and color. Not sure how you were able to separate it from the background, but it's a nice touch! I'm giving it a 9.
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Year of the Horse
12/04/2007 12:57:35 PM
Year of the Horse
by riolobo

Comment:
Definitely fits the theme! Not sure how much control over the scene you had, but here's my 2 cents:
- Lighting could have been a bit better (needs more fill lighting or something)
- The colored horse could be a little bit more into the frame instead of at the edge of the frame.

I'm giving it a 7.

Nice pic!
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No. 501 - momentarily separated from the herd
12/04/2007 12:53:10 PM
No. 501 - momentarily separated from the herd
by saiphfire

Comment:
Nice composition and technique, but doesn't say 'alone in a crowd' to me. So, I'm giving it a 6. If the theme matched, it would get a 9 from me! Amazing pic!
Disconnected
12/04/2007 12:50:54 PM
Disconnected
by figaro

Comment:
Suggestions:
- Subject should probably be 'entering' the photo, 'leaving' the photo (face subject towards center of photo) for more interesting composition.
- The camera should have been angled down a bit more to capture more of the surroundings and less of the ceiling, and position the subject so her face is a bit higher in the frame.
- Use a softer focus and shallower depth of field to dramatize her being disconnected.

Just my 2 cents. =-)
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Lonely Red
12/04/2007 12:45:35 PM
Lonely Red
by scooter88

Comment:
Very nice. I thought of doing the same thing, but never got around to it (and it would probably not have come out as nice as yours).

My 2 cents: Perhaps the red leaf should have filled in the frame a little more (50% larger) and be slightly off-center.
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Laser Lantern
06/15/2007 07:59:30 AM
Laser Lantern
by ClementeH

Comment:
Thanks everyone for the constructive feedback. I'm just starting out as a hobbyist photographer and this kind of feedback helps me improve.

Much appreciated!
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