jodi2.jpg
by fordmanf1

Comment:
Great shot..I realize that not all people have the perfect expression. The one thing that bugs me is that shirt. My eyes keep moving to her shirt. maybe using photoshop make the all but the face darker.

whoops..forgot to mention the arms. Instead of having her place her arms in her pocket (as to see the imperfections in her arm)..I would have her lay them behind her back out of the pocket. Standing poses are a bit more difficult to pose the arms.

Message edited by author 2007-07-01 18:53:50.

nick.jpg
by fordmanf1

Comment:
white, stripes and flowers are the worst clothing to wear. Nice pose! maybe have his back leaning on the tree or even his shoulder...his hand is in a strange position.

Message edited by author 2007-07-01 18:49:26.

terri.jpg
by fordmanf1

Comment:
A better pose would be have her sit with her legs to the side.
it is hard to shoot white ..I always tell my clients to where anything but white.

Kanya
by Makka

Comment:
Her neck looks way to long in this shot. I would have her tilt her head slightly, maybe bring her hand up and relax her upper body. Not sure but I also think the lighting is a bit bright. Lower the brightness would give more contrast. hmmm..

Kanya
by Makka

Comment:
Wow, she looks like a barbie doll here. Very nice!

Kanya
by Makka

Comment:
MUCH much better with the pose. I like the eyes and her beautiful smile! Very good work with the lighting as well. Maybe a bit bright on the forehead. Nothing the healing brush couldn't take care of. ;-)

Kanya
by Makka

Comment:
Beautiful portrait..the only suggestion is maybe not have her look up so high since she does have a larger eye it would prevent so much of the white part of her eye from being the main focus.

11
by LeeD

Comment:
I like this one but I do however wish I could see her face more.

4
by LeeD

Comment:
Is that a foot I see kicking her..haha..very beautiful image. Love the contrast!

To Many Girls!
by Sonifo

Comment:
I still think it's candid. Kids performing at tech rehearsal have no clue what is going on. They are just doing what they are told.