urban childhood
by kolasi

Comment:
mmmmm, been doubting what to vote on this one. I like the fact that the pole clearly stands out, and I am in general a fan of diagonals and vanishing points, both of which are clearly present in this pic. On the other hand, there's many distractions, giving the picture a snapshottish feel. Seems to me the sign is in Korean and finding an urban area in Korea without many distractions is near impossible, but than again you might want to try to avoid the distractions a bit more. Had you for instance taken one step to the left, then the electricity pole would have disappeared behind the sign, whereas now, the power lines lead my attention right to it.

Hope it helps. 6

One More Empty Swingset
by azooyorkmystery

Comment:
I think the swing should at least have some light.

Playing Dress-Up
by myra

Comment:
Yeah, I still do that too.

Ooops, there goes my little secret. :0 :P

Seriously, nice pic, white balance seems to be a bit too warm and there's some blown highlights, but not very disturbing. 7

Needing Ann
by Lydia

Comment:
I wonder how many people will vote you down because there is a child in the picture. I like the concept, but I think it would have worked better with a lower camera angle. 6

Second Childhood or Midlife Crisis?
by boyd2000

Comment:
You are nuts. That's a plus. I can see your tripod reflected, that's a minus. 6

Spinning Top
by DistantColours

Comment:
Would have liked to see some motion blur here.

The Age Of Innocence
by rio78

Comment:
Could do with a deeper dof, otherwise nice shot

just for childrens
by rulo100

Comment:
Looks like your horizon is tilted

End of the day
by the99

Comment:
hmmmm, not too happy with the high angle and the tilted water lines

Childhood memories
by Scapeshots

Comment:
I feel the quasi old look of the picture does not fit in at all with the plastic playground material. You might have tried a washed 70s kind of toning, but not sepia