The Fire Theft
by Daniel

Comment:
new life at the base of the tree ? Shot needs to be much tighter on the little plant IMHO

Time For Bed
by mykoleary

Comment:
interesting shot. Ember really needs to be in sharper focus, or sharpened a bit. Good attempt.

Just Dandy
by connie

Comment:
Nicely composed shot with lots of details. Lighting hasn't helped you much here though, some fill flash or bounced light could have really lifted this which ha the potential to be great.

The Transition We Have All Made
by Corey

Comment:
nicely done, especially with the shot showing on the computer. The comp seems a bit tilted, and I feel it could have all been a bit tighere ? Imaginative attempt.

Progress
by Mousie

Comment:
cool theme, great arrangement. I'd personally turn it 180 degrees so it was more 'upbeat' Nicely done.

Amber
by ClubJuggle

Comment:
Nice. the wires are horrible though, even though it looks like you've tried to frame them and compose them to add something. The wood pylon behind is also distracting. Great idea, but I think you should have tried a different set of lights.

Too Late For Soup
by frogperils

Comment:
composition needs some work to clear out the clutter in the frame, e.g., the book, the bit of something other than onion on the chopping board etc. Light is a bit flat too which doesn't make it very interesting - maybe sunlight/ daylight would have brought out some textures/ shadows ?

Interesting interpretation of the challenge though.

In or Out?
by marcie

Comment:
Flash/ flair is annoying.

Train Switch Tracks
by AnAUTiger

Comment:
The challenge was transition, not train station! :) Good idea, and nicely executed. Think it might be stronger if you'd just got the tracks and lost the background (i.e., tiled downwards a bit more) but this is still good. Look at it with the top cm cropped off - more mysterious, where do the tracks go kind of fell to it. Just a thought.

The Chameleon
by fsieradzki

Comment:
cool find, nice leaf. The shadows on the left detract though.could have been a vertical shot and a tighter framing.