Last Chop of the Day
by sanandan

Comment:
*Critique Club*

Very nice image, definately different from many of the entries. The overall composition is very good as is the focus. This definately meets the challenge and very well portrays someone working.

There really isn't a lot you could do differently other than maybe bring her out of the shadows some it gets to dark to the left side and her shoulder blends in with the background cause of it.

In all it nicely done and very appealling.

Anna

Beautiful Bride
by boyte1

Comment:
Bride? Really? She looks so young. Beautiful image no matter what though.

Basenjis Behaving Badly in Bed
by kavamama

Comment:
From the angel which you captured this you simply have to many lines and distracting elements, also the front of the dogs faces would have been a nice touch.

B is for Barbers in Black and white
by EddyG

Comment:
Very nicely done, b & w is so perfect for this image, works wonderfully, couldn't image it having any impact in color like it does in B & W.

Boaters
by Alecia

Comment:
This is a very stunning B&W nicely done. I love it, and this one is simply cropped so perrectly, the clouds are there but not over dominating the image, the waves are present, and overall it just is so appealling, iBest of luck cause it is my favorite of the week. 10

Bouncer at the Highlander
by ursula

Comment:
Critique Club

Very interesting image for the at work challenge they both seem very relaxed and quite at home in this setting. The focus and dof are both good, the colors are very eye catching and well bounched out.

There is one tiny problem with lines as you look at the photo your eyes are drawn off the couple and to a person sitting in the background, simply cause of two leading lines running directly into this person, the black post in the foreground and the red wall accent coming down in the middle of the photo both end up on the same person and take attention from the couple in the photo.

The photo is very well done and does meet the challenge, definately a lot to look at in this photo and yet not overly cluttered.

~Anna~

behind blue eyeys
by jbruno1397

Comment:
you are too washed out in close the nose the left side is the worst as the skin and the whites of your eyes just blend together there is no seperation of color

Black Delight
by kosmikkreeper

Comment:
Critique Club

This is definately one abstract, still trying to decide if it is black licorice or one of those recycled tire welcome mats. But I will go with licorice.

Your dof and focus seem very good here and there is a really wonderful texture, its the glare or points of highlight here that I don't like, they are just slightly too strong and make it appear to be more of just a macro of black licorice than a low key photo.

This was definately one of the orginal photos in this challenge and definately nicely done.

Anna

Back In Time
by autool

Comment:
*Critique Club*


Overall this is a really nice still life photo, the composition is good and the use of black and white works well. Now in all honesty though it is far to bright for a low key photo. Darkening the entire image would have made it work well, cause you already have some shadowing its just to bright for this challenge.

Your focus is very good and strong and makes the photo work, it just didn't work with this challenge.

Anna

Such is Life
by karmat

Comment:
Critique Club

If that one card I can't make out is a Q you got a great hand there. If you are playing poker I'm glad I'm not at the table =o) The dof used here works nicely, the focus is very good but what I don't like is there is just a little bit to much light for this challenge and not enough shadowing. Nice composition and yeah even with to much light it still is obvious it was done in low light so it does meet the challenge.

Anna