My Station-ery
by Rimwulf

Comment:
A nice play on words. The hand needs more light on it to better convey your intent. It would also help if the background didn't have such a strong light source, as it draws my eyes away from the intended focus point of your entry.

I WAS THERE!!
by Car54

Comment:
Wow, you chose some tough lighting conditions to shoot under. At first I wondered if a post card was really stationery but since you can write a message on the back it certainly is. I don't think the black and white conversion works with this photo. Maybe more contrast would help but I'm willing to bet that the post card would suffer greatly.

Forgotten And Discarded.........Until Next Semester
by JSAYB

Comment:
The concept is good but the execution would have been better if the school supplies were placed on a desk in the corner. As is, the background is busy and distracts from the main subject.

THE LEADER
by a_jhamb

Comment:
You need to play around with the lighting a little bit her to help give this image more definition and appeal. The background would improve considerably if it were a brighter white and the depth of focus is a bit too shallow on the pens.

this is how he popped the Question
by Gracechild7

Comment:
Nice image and well composed but I don't see the connection to stationery. If your intent is that the jewelery was used in place of stationery to convey his feelings, it doens't communicate that well and I couldn't have even make that connection without the title. Sorry.

Our Write'n Paper
by cyan

Comment:
Everything about this image says tilted except the rod the coffee pots are hanging on. It looks like things should be sliding off the back of the wagon. The poll in front of the cowboy holding the write'n paper really hurts this image. Since the colors aren't very saturated, this would look better in B&W or sepia.

Envelopes
by Fromac

Comment:
This could use some different lighting, as it looks a little flat. Maybe moving the light to the other side would help.

Light Slips Through Holes
by right_field

Comment:
Pretty effective at what you were trying to accomplish; however, the glare from the light source takes away from the main topic of this entry.

Cornered
by meo729

Comment:
For being the main focus of the composition, the corner should be in better focus. It would have been nice to see something written in the ledger as well.

Life Unfinished
by LucidLotus

Comment:
I like the placement of the pencil and the stationery. The image would have been stronger without the vase and with a table cloth with less texture.