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| 07/11/2006 05:50:40 PM |
The Dreaded Letterby jusdino4itComment: I like the composition and idea.
I think you used narrow DOF to focus on the letter, but the pen is distracting me. I think if it had been in focus, it wouldn't do that. Go figger.
As for the paper itself, it's not quite bright enough. I get the impression of someone writing this in a very dim room. |
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| 07/11/2006 05:49:03 PM |
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| 07/11/2006 05:48:48 PM |
Apolloby aimeethetooComment: First photo to make me go "wow!"
But I have to admit, I don't see this as stationery, which should at least have something to do with writing or communicating. It's not "anything made of paper." At least, not to me. |
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| 07/11/2006 05:47:52 PM |
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| 07/11/2006 05:47:37 PM |
Aborted Suicideby pointandshootComment: I think you were going for a 3-D composition, but the tight crop makes me see it as flat.
Also, ouch on the title. I was smiling, thinking of a grammar problem making someone go cross-eyed, and then the title stopped that dead in its tracks. |
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| 07/11/2006 05:46:35 PM |
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| 07/11/2006 05:46:01 PM |
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| 07/11/2006 05:45:49 PM |
Bunched Pencilsby hsvhoonComment: Pretty, and reminiscent of other shots I've seen (which is just fine). My concern is the lack of contrast. Nothing really jumps. |
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| 07/11/2006 05:45:16 PM |
Lost Evidenceby SherwinJamesComment: Ah, very nice. I got the point even before I saw the title.
What's the vertical line, though? Looks like a spike through the paper, so it distracts me. |
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| 07/11/2006 05:44:37 PM |
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