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Bunched Pencils
Bunched Pencils
hsvhoon


Photograph Information Photographer's Comments
Challenge: Stationery (Basic Editing III)
Camera: Canon EOS-350D Rebel XT
Lens: Sigma 18-200mm f/3.5-6.3 DC for Canon
Location: My house
Date: Jul 3, 2006
Aperture: F9
ISO: 100
Shutter: 6 Seconds
Galleries: Abstract
Date Uploaded: Jul 4, 2006

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Statistics
Place: 45 out of 122
Avg (all users): 5.4759
Avg (commenters): 5.0000
Avg (participants): 5.1667
Avg (non-participants): 5.5466
Views since voting: 799
Views during voting: 393
Votes: 290
Comments: 21
Favorites: 0

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 Comments Made During the Challenge
07/11/2006 05:45:49 PM
Pretty, and reminiscent of other shots I've seen (which is just fine). My concern is the lack of contrast. Nothing really jumps.
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 07/11/2006 11:11:12 AM
Nice colors, and great comp. Needs to be sharper to really feel the impact.
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 07/11/2006 06:47:51 AM
Yes, these are bunched pencils, nicely photographed, but not stationery.
 07/10/2006 01:31:55 PM
The background is a bit blah, but I like it otherwise. Wider DOF may have been needed too, something about the focus bothers my eyes.
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 07/09/2006 11:45:28 PM
Very nicely done. great colors and detail.
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 07/08/2006 04:02:45 PM
Nice and sharp - would have liked a brighter background and tighter crop.
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 07/08/2006 11:17:59 AM
A different colored BG might help make the colors "pop" more IMHO.
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 07/07/2006 03:13:42 PM
Like the colorful pencils but where is the stationery.
 07/07/2006 09:28:59 AM
Good focal point and lighting; however the background doesn't work with this image. The brown background sort of blends in with some of the pencil colors and steals the potential pop of this image.
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 07/06/2006 11:05:22 PM
Nice use of colours, but somehow the composition doesn't really work for me.
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 07/06/2006 07:39:59 PM
Nice DOF. Sharper focus would've improved this, as would more contrast between the pencils and the background color.
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 07/06/2006 02:14:37 PM
I am sure you would disagree or you wouldn't have entered the photo in this challenge, but IMO DNMC. Still a very nice photo.
 07/06/2006 09:38:51 AM
Nice but wrong subject.
 07/06/2006 06:21:27 AM
Great details and sharp image.
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 07/06/2006 02:42:35 AM
Gosh. There's just something about this that draws me in. I love the colors and the shapes, but there's something extra that I can't put my finger on that made me gasp when I saw this.
  Photographer found comment helpful.
 07/06/2006 12:05:38 AM
Interesting subject, but the focus could be tighter. And if we could get even closer to the pencil tips, that would be even cooler.
I would be careful about using the pencil with the arrows though. The arrows lead the eye away from the main subject and off the image completely. Not exactly what you were going for I presume.
Nice background though. You did get some interesting colour there.
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 07/05/2006 12:49:23 PM
A nicely composed shot though not sure about the background colour
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 07/05/2006 09:32:50 AM
Nice focus on the pencils. I wish the background was white or black. The drab brown color kind of kills the vibrancy of the pencil colors.
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 07/05/2006 06:25:51 AM
Good idea, but the background color dosen't enhanse the image at all.....
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 07/05/2006 05:16:25 AM
Great idea and execution - well lit, framed, etc. I might've been tempted to crop a little more off the bottom, though.
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 07/05/2006 03:57:55 AM
Nice - coloured pencils always seem to look good. The yellow arrows seem to take my eye away to the side
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