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The Dreaded Letter
The Dreaded Letter
jusdino4it


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Challenge: Stationery (Basic Editing III)
Camera: Canon EOS-350D Rebel XT
Lens: Sigma 70-300mm f/4-5.6 APO DG Macro for Canon
Location: Pittsburgh PA
Date: Jul 4, 2006
Aperture: 5.6
ISO: 400
Shutter: 1/60
Galleries: Still Life, Astrophotography
Date Uploaded: Jul 4, 2006

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Statistics
Place: 73 out of 122
Avg (all users): 5.1625
Avg (commenters): 5.4375
Avg (participants): 5.0000
Avg (non-participants): 5.2036
Views since voting: 1044
Views during voting: 409
Votes: 277
Comments: 16
Favorites: 0


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 Comments Made During the Challenge
07/11/2006 05:50:40 PM
I like the composition and idea.

I think you used narrow DOF to focus on the letter, but the pen is distracting me. I think if it had been in focus, it wouldn't do that. Go figger.

As for the paper itself, it's not quite bright enough. I get the impression of someone writing this in a very dim room.
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07/11/2006 03:01:53 PM
Great photo - but it would have had even more impact if the words were actually written in handwriting instead of being a printed card..or was it?
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07/11/2006 07:53:30 AM
Actually, this shows a beautiful piece of stationery, that is undoubtedly tied to an unfortunate event. the photo itself isn't the clearest, but it clearly conveys a message.
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07/10/2006 08:25:43 AM
Wondering if the image would have been improved by also having the pen in focus?
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07/08/2006 03:43:34 PM
Would have liked to see more balanced framing on this with less of the table above, and some showing below.
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07/07/2006 05:19:35 PM
nice idea, but needs more. casket in the background, etc. to make it really click.
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07/07/2006 03:16:41 PM
Nice presentation
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07/07/2006 09:21:51 AM
I would have liked to see the tip of the pen in focus with the paper. The composition is well thought out and overall, this is a very nice image.
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07/06/2006 08:47:02 PM
Nicely done, the pen set up the way you did is an added touch that adds to the interest.
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07/06/2006 07:59:25 PM
An increased DOF where the pen is in focus would be better. Nice idea.
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07/06/2006 01:44:05 PM
I like the idea in this photo. I think the pen should be sharper, and the paper should be aligned better. The pen to me is a major element of the photo--but it's a bit frustrating to have it so out of focus in the shot.
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07/06/2006 06:05:05 AM
Oh such a sad letter but a pretty design.
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07/05/2006 07:05:36 PM
heartfelt.
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07/05/2006 03:19:20 PM
interesting shot for a stationary catalog...
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07/05/2006 10:29:55 AM
Fits the challenge well
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07/05/2006 01:17:24 AM
good job! personally i would have liked the pen to be more in focus.
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