Dumb Nurse
by derekleung

Comment:
~~Critique Club Comment~~

COMPOSITION-
Composition is great in this. Nice work with the story and how you've laid everything out. Very interesting idea for this challenge. I can't think of anything better technically to change with this shot. I think that you've cropped it great and I like the diagonal letter layout. The pills are great.

BACKGROUND-
N/A, there really isn't much of a background other than the hint of the table. No clutterness on it.

CAMERA WORK-
Great DOF and lighting in this. Everything is clear.

DIGITAL PROCESSING-
No compression artifacts or noise. You've cropped this great and the levels are right on. I wonder if you could lighten it up just a bit.

MY OPINION-
Not many people understood this shot and voted you down. I was one that didn't understand and I gave you a 5. I understand now that I can read the comments and I think this shot is great. Very nice take on the challenge. I thought your camera work was great. Good job.

Login
by stephan

Comment:
~~Critique Club Comment~~

COMPOSITION(Content)-
This is a unique idea. Only one of them this week. It is very simple. It just seems a plain. You've got good detail on it being that close. Having it in the Rule of Thirds would have been nice.

BACKGROUND- All those little green dots are kind of distracting. It just gives a wierd texture feeling to the picture.

CAMERA WORK- you did good with this. Shot is in focus. and clear. Good choice on the aperature and shutter speed.

DIGITAL PROCESSING- You did good in not having any noise from the camera. I might suggest if you have photoshop or another photo editing program and go into the selective color option and if you turn the black channel up to about 80 to 100% and the use the brightness and contrast you can totally get rid of all those bumps and keep the "login" about the same color.

MY OPINION- unique idea for the challenge. It didn't impact me personally that much. I went in and played with the color channels and "legally" edited for this site. If you'd like to see what it looks like just drop me a line. Hope I helped any.

Green Cheese
by Chaszmyr

Comment:
A green moon. Looks a little fuzzy. Nice work in changing this around.

Something old, something new, something borrowed, something blue.
by RiderGal

Comment:
Nice title. I like the color and texture in those boats. The background is interesting with the snow.

Stairway to Heaven
by goodtempo

Comment:
Nice angle and perfect title for this shot. It doesn't quite seem centered.

wet leaf
by shutterfly

Comment:
good eye. I like the fall colors on the leaf. Maybe you could have cropped this a little less tight.

Flower Girl
by Sonifo

Comment:
Cute shot. I like how you've cropped it.

Roadside Repairs (Portrait of a friend)
by Azrifel

Comment:
Great capture. I wish the sky was a little nicer to you. Nice work.

Abstract Martini
by Alecia

Comment:
I love the colors in this. It seems a bit soft on the base.

Chasity
by connie

Comment:
Good profile shot. It seems to have a slight white tint to the shot. I'm not sure if this was intentional, but it can be fixed with a little contrast and brightness levels. Great composition.