Deforming Parallax Conundrum
by Ecce_Signum

Comment:
Oh yeah! Way cool perspective and the toning was well done for this image.

Daisy Parker's Chronicles
by kiwiness

Comment:
Top scores are just old hat to you now aren't they Gary? Good stuff buddy.

Devil Plays Chess
by sir_bazz

Comment:
Congrats on a great score for a fantasic and creative image. Good job Garry!

Doomsday Power Conspiracy
by Tallbloke

Comment:
Excellent capture - fantasic color. Why would this not ribbon here? Good job indeed!

Del Primo Christ (The First Christ)
by AlexSaberi

Comment:
Knew it was you Alex. Awesome stuff as usual!

Happy Spring
by ShannonLee

Comment:
Greetings from the Critique Club Shannon.

Good title and the colors are certainly beautiful. I think composition really got you in a bad spot here. There's a lot going on (busy) and my eyes just keep wandering all over the image wanting more. All of the subjects on the edge of this shot are cropped out: The flowers on the bottom front and the ones in the bucket. The guy's back and feet. The lady's elbow, etc. The tilted canvas in the background didn't help you either. Also seems to be a stop underexposed as well. So many things fight for attention here that it's a bit hard to overcome.

Thanks for the opportunity to critique this image Shannon.

Cheers - Phil

Camera Shy
by nsoroma79

Comment:
Greetings from the Critique Club Lorrie!

Abosolute cutie pie of a child. This capture makes you want to squeeze her to death and pinch her cheeks in the process :). Exposure looks to be good and you handled the lighting well. This is a shot that any parent would be proud to hang on their wall.

Even though 6.0211 isn't a bad score at all, why didn't it receive a better one? My opinion would be the vignetting you added. While I certainly like it in this case, it may not appeal to the masses. It's definitely a hit or miss step for DPC. You felt it worked, I feel it worked, but some probably didn't think so. I'd also clone out the little blemish on her arm.

Overall a great shot indeed!

Thank you for the opportunity to critique this image Lorrie.

Cheers - Phil

EBONY GLAMOUR
by MelTech1

Comment:
Greetings from the Critique Club Mel.

Your wife is certainly lovely and I am quite fond of the pose. Her stare is quite inviting as well.

The first thing the voters will notice is the image size. You will find that you will automatically start out at a disadvantage when you post up an shot of such small dimensions. As far as technicals go I think the exposure is fine. I do think you need some unsharp mask and levels adjustments here to bring out some pop. Also, for a glam shot you'll want to try a different backdrop and something other than a shirt. She'll need some make-up as well. Not necessarily needed for her beauty but for a glam shot it is a must.

Overall a pretty lady that you should be proud to show off.

Thanks for the opportunity to critique this image Mel.

Cheers - Phil

ELLE
by unicum

Comment:
Sorry but I don't like to critique a person's image when s/he has yet to find any comments helpful. I'll reserve my critique until a later date.

Cheers - Phil

Message edited by Manic - Critique Removed from CC Status..

How many shall pass him so?
by fotodude

Comment:
Greetings from the Critique Club Brando.

At first glance I find this a pretty powerful shot. While his condition is definitely sorrowful, it evokes more emotion from me simply because of the smile. If he had a sad look on his face I don't think it work work so well. Your photographers comment using the definition of spirit is spot on.

Composition is good. I do think it would be just a bit better if you had cropped just above his crutches taking the items in the store windows out. They pull your eye towards them and away from the subject. Using my mouse I find the image more powerful scrolling to show just the black windowsills above him. I do like the fact that you didn't crop just below his feet but left a small bit of space. I also wonder how it would look if you moved just a bit to the left during shoot and crop him to the left 1/3 showing more open space to the right.

Overall a good job here and a capture you should be proud of.

Thanks for the opportunity to critique this image Brando.

Cheeers - Phil