Rhythm in Blue
by karmat

Comment:
Interesting abstract. I don't think I like the framing of the shot. Maybe rotating the shot so that the bottom line of the blue object would parallel the bottom edge of the frame would create a good effect. Currently the visable blue shapes seem somewhat random and don't really have any pattern or form. 4

Silver Star
by 3boyzMom

Comment:
I don't think the subject makes for a very interesting photograph, at least not from this angle. The lighting is too dim as well. Perhaps an overhead shot or an angle that would create symetry would create a more interesting effect. A plain white backdrop might be something to experiment with as well. 3

Grandstand Piano Keys
by DougPaz

Comment:
I like the crop on this shot, and I think the subject works very well. I think the title is too over the top (but that's not the type of thing I'd take off points for). Solid photo. 7

Bouncing Balls Stopped in Time
by GolferDDS

Comment:
I'm not sure if the negative space at the top is necessary, but it doesn't really detract from the shot. I like the concept and I find it interesting that you used balls with different numbers, showing that it obviously was not one ball in motion. I think the lighting should have been better distributed so as to avoid the right side being overexposed, and to avoid the shadows. I enjoyed this shot. 6

Organized Chaos
by boyte1

Comment:
Unfortunately, this shot ends up just looking like chaos. The numerous lines in this picture don't form any strong patterns or structures (even though I'm sure they do in real life). Perhaps the subject is just too cluttered to come up with a good clear shot from, or perhaps another angle would have yeilded better results. I also think the barbed wire and lightpost don't add to the shot, but instead add to the clutter. Good luck. 3

Benched Snow
by crabappl3

Comment:
It has a sort of dark cryptic look to it. I like the texture very much. Good work. 8

ChinaTown
by BAMartin

Comment:
the shadows are very distracting.

Vinerows
by lennier

Comment:
way too dark. All I can really make out is the clouds.

For All Time
by Annida

Comment:
too dark to make out what the subject is.

Stars
by pitsaman

Comment:
The crop makes it seem unbalanced. I'd have prefered a symetrical approach.