Joshua
by peecee

Comment:
Very good lighting and exposure.

Again With The Camera!?!
by AzCKelly

Comment:
This is a great capture!1 What an expression. I feel that it is under exposed though.

skeptical
by muckpond

Comment:
What a look!! She's great. maybe a tiny bit more light in her left eye to give it as much impact as the right one. But still 10.

The tracks of her tears
by saiphfire

Comment:
I feel that this would have been more effective for you if your model had been in darker clothes to connect with her surroundings. as it is, the white is overpowering the scene, taking the focus from the models face and eyes where it should be. a bit of some catchlights in her eyes would have brought some attention back to her face, but the appear to be lifeless. But I do like your overall theory here and your model is perfect for the scene.

sunkissed
by mcfly707

Comment:
The light is hitting the upper lip and I feel it is claiming the attention instead of the lips and the flower. Nice concept though.

Vivid
by frumoaznicul

Comment:
I felt that her eyes should have been a bit more sharp in focus Lovely girl, nice colors.

Patrick
by bicray

Comment:
There seems a slight blur in one of the bottom lens of his glasses that is attracting my eyes, but basically this portrait show as lot of character. Nice job.

Serenade
by taterbug

Comment:
a nice composition but I am not seeing anything to give the photo any real punch.

Rainy Days
by clenny

Comment:
I feel your subject is too far down in your frame and the boy in the background appears too close to the one in front to make this composition work well. The expression and light on his face make it an interesting photograph.

Attitude
by shutterfly

Comment:
Beautiful lighting and composition.