Natural Beauty
by usia

Comment:
*Critique Club*

This woman does have natural beauty, but your photo doesn't portray it very well. The pose looks unnatural. She looks very uncomfortable. I think that her hair shouldn't have been tucked behind her ears. I am not sure why you cropped off the other breast either? Overall, the photo quality and the model are great IMO, but the pose and composition were your downfall. Good luck in future challenges, this one was very hard!

Mandy

In your dreams...
by Truegsht

Comment:
*Critique Club*

I like the softness of the photo. She looks like she is taking a VERY HOT shower. I think that it would look better if she wasn't clutching the breast that tight, and if she wasn't wearing the rings. Overall, nice picture and good luck in future challenges.

Mandy

On a Cloud
by fotodude

Comment:
*Critique Club*

I enjoy high key photos. I think that your photo needs more contrast on the legs though. They almost blend in with the background. The pose is ok IMO, but you need more practice with dodge and burn or cloning. It would have been helpful if you mentioned your process in the photographers comments. See how the legs look like areas are missing? And how there are dark splotches where there shouldn't be? Overall the picture is too washed out. Good luck in future challenges.

Mandy

Destiny and Legacy
by MPRPRO

Comment:
I love this! I think thats its great. I wish you would have played a little with the colors and contrast to give it a more dramatic look, good job!

Candid: Business Man Eating Lunch
by bobdaveant

Comment:
did he say something to you?

d e v o t i o n & l o v e
by marmalade1121

Comment:
I hope your entry is better than this one, because this would have been a 10 from me!

Soldis
by DogAngel

Comment:
very nice portrait!

Elvish
by rscorp

Comment:
this is wonderful!

Spirits of the Night
by elsapo

Comment:
cool!

La fille du Moulin Rouge
by Louison

Comment:
I love this!