HayAgain, How About Some Carrots Lady?
by Gallatin

Comment:
Love that shot .... GREAT JOB 9. Lionel

Un-Forbidden Fruit
by autool

Comment:
Very good humour. and realisation. Passing on the distracting 'stuff' in the background. Good luck

Silly Boy
by Sonifo

Comment:
Nicely silly :-)6. Lionel

'ONE FOOT IN THE GRAVE'
by howza

Comment:
voting on the \\\'smile/laugh factor\\\' this week , less on the quality.
5. Lionel
I do not get it .. what the tube the bird is on ? please pm me. Lionelm

A site to see from the square
by Yomi

Comment:
Critique Club

INITIAL RESPONSE: Nice color and exposition. A lot of details .. a little too busy.

COMPOSITION-CONTENT - The fountains and the trees/plants brings nice colors. I would have croppe on the right just before the pole and on the left just between the 2 lights on the left of the fountaint. I think this way you keep the essential and the scene looks better.

CAMERA WORK-TECHNICAL- Very Good night exposure exposure and depth of field.

MY OPINION ON THE PHOTO - I like the shot for the colors and the water ... but I think it's too busy (see comments above).


Lionel

Not the most comfortable ride
by dazzler

Comment:
Critique Club

INITIAL RESPONSE: Nice angle, distracting house at the top , no specific story.

COMPOSITION-CONTENT - I ike the road, the car and the right part of the picture but I think the blind in the upper left corner and the house in the upper part of the picture are distracting.
The angle is nice and suggest a strong slope.

BACKROUND : See above

CAMERA WORK-TECHNICAL- Good exposure and depth of field.

MY OPINION ON THE PHOTO - Interesting. The shot make me think how it wcould have been better, meaning to me it had some potential. I would try to crop a little and a little saturatio in the colors.

Lionel

Packing
by mliborio

Comment:
Critique Club

INITIAL RESPONSE: Not really interesting, good depth of field and exposition.

COMPOSITION-CONTENT - The items for travelling are there ,or some of them at least. But the composition by itself is not very interesting. Missing a little part of the suitcase, trash and bed table partly in view.
I would have cropped or compose the picture differently.

CAMERA WORK-TECHNICAL- Good exposure and depth of field. If you use da flash it's well controlled. The is a reflection but it does not look like it's from the flash.

MY OPINION ON THE PHOTO - Not a very interesting shot even if the technical quality of the shot is correct.

Lionel

Traveling Through Hidalgo
by JEM

Comment:
Critique Club

INITIAL RESPONSE: Good composition, nice colors, look overexposed

COMPOSITION-CONTENT - The composition and the content seems very good to me. But even to suggest to say with a heavy sun I think the background is too bright (The donkey by itself is fine).
The wall looks pure white and we're missing details and coors on the cushion.
I think you brought the right items for this composition .
I like a lot the story it tells and the animal is in a nice osition.
Color would be deeper as well (except if it does not convey what you wanted to convey). I would definitly try some leevl adjustement.

BACKGROUND : Significant in the 'story telling' part of the picture. too bright really even if that way it detach the donkey more.

CAMERA WORK-TECHNICAL- See above. I think the exposure (if you do not have any processing) is too high. The wall in the background seems all pure white pixels without details.

DIGITAL PROCESSING - TECHNICAL - Could afford some processing to adjust the levels.

MY OPINION ON THE PHOTO - I like the shot but I am really distracted and bothered by the overexposed part of the picture. The story and the very good framing still make it a nice picture.

Lionel

Message edited by author 2003-01-12 20:18:28.

Here Comes the Sun
by lmhr

Comment:
No a huge fan of flowers .. but I like that one a lot. Did you try a square shape ? I am not sure the empty space bring that much or at least not all of it . I like the llight projection (even without the song title theme) except maybe the part more of the left, very close to the petal. Very nice colors, unusual green (I like that) . Congrats. 8. Lionel

Coldplay
by arnit

Comment:
Long long shot ... for the challenge theme ... but very nice color/dof/expression. 7. Lionel