Art Deco
by CalliopeKel

Comment:
I love this shot! Very good Black and White! Great Job!!

Covarrubias Adobe
by Germaine

Comment:
I really like this shot. I love the way the waviness of the pitchfork is repeated in the pattern of the doors. Very unique! Good eye!
Greg

Contemplation
by Haimai

Comment:
*Critique Club*

Hello!

The first thing I am wondering is what you mean by "huge crop"... I am generally not a fan of cropping except (in a case like this) to just slide one side in tighter, if that is what you did. Whenever possible, use the camera to do the cropping for you. Not to be confusing... but I actually like the crop you used here. My focus is pretty much on your eye, which is probably what you wanted. I think the overall picture could be brought up a bit, lightened, with special care given to the lip area. That could get too bright really quick. I think the problem here is you have no detail in your dark areas. People always want to see some detail in the shadows. Everyone's monitor is different and I am seeing a blueish tint which I like for this challenge. Blue can definately indicate bored!

Toronto Skyscrapers
by Di

Comment:
*Critique Club*

Hello,

This is a neat shot! The dark sky reflected in the building on the left helps keep my eye focused on the more interesting main building. The way all of these lines converge also really helps this composition. You did a good job with the touchy area at the top right of the building on the right. That contrasty area is very nicely handled. That side of the building could have easily been blown out, so nice job. The only thing I might do differently is to very slightly burn the upper right corner. I think it would benefit this a bit. I cant help thinking what this would look like in infrared!!

Table Top Gaming
by Schuff

Comment:
*Critique Club*

Hello,
I think you did a really good job composing this shot! The darker area around the edges help keep focus on the paddle and ball. I like the overall warm feeling as it adds to the nostalgia here. Kinda brings me back to my youth playing ping pong in the church basement...anyway.... The only area that bothers me alittle is the brightness of the top of the net crossing over the paddle. That could be brought down a bit and it would add more attention to the ball which would then be whiter. I also think on a shot like this you could actually soften it up to contribute to the mood. Overall, nicely done!

i dare you!! dare race car
by gtp1164

Comment:
*Critique Club*

Hello,

This is a nice shot however fairly trite... I actually like all of the reflections you picked up in this photo as it adds interest which would probably not be there otherwise. My eye keeps being drawn to the wheel which could be darkened or brought down alittle. Overall I am not sure how useful it is as a stock photo but I think you did a good job shooting this car.

Bowling
by ChasSourek

Comment:
*Critique Club*

Hello,
I really like your composition here. You did a good job! The right side of the picture needs some light kicked back into it but care really needs to be taken to not lighten the lower right area or detail will be lost in the shirt. The left side behind the subject is pretty blown out and is distracting. I do like the light around the left side of the ball though... It just needs to be balanced with some light on the right side area of the ball. Overall, a nice shot!

Her husband's "work truck"
by okiesisi

Comment:
*Critique Club*

Hello,
As a Stock Photograph, this one might be difficult to sell. The best thing going in this shot is the perspective. You picked a good place to shoot. Yes, the picture would be better without the power lines. The natural darkening of the sky at the top of the picture helps keep my eyes on the two subjects, so that is a plus. I would liked to have seen their faces. I think that would have added to this shot. My eye keeps wandering to the lower right. That area seems a bit bright so bringing that down alittle would also help.

Pater Noster
by jmsetzler

Comment:
I like this shot.. nice grain!

Cubism
by ganders

Comment:
*Critique Club*

Hello!
I dont know how useful this is as a stock photograph so I will leave that comment to others and just focus on the image and how it was presented. I actually like your very shallow depth of field. It might be the strongest part of this picture. Your composition is good although I think the box needed to be closed or the top included. The top part of the box is bothersome as my eye keeps wondering up there away from the cubes. I think I would have rather preferred the background to be darker than the foreground under the the box and cubes. I think that would have kept my attention more down in front. Overall, I think you did a good job.