Find the Pencil
by #1 Bronco Fan

Comment:
This is a graphical composition, the shape of the shirt is bold and so is the colour. I think the carpet beneath it detracts hugely from the shot in terms of colour and texture (though perhaps texture might be OK if the colour was different). Perhaps because of the pink carpet, it doesn't appeal to me visually.
Kavey

three
by FranziskaLang

Comment:
Simple and warm. Love the shadow shapes.
7, Kavey

I still need my pencil.
by jenarom

Comment:
Interesting idea but the resulting image doesn't pack a punch with me... I'd almost be happier with just the pencil and the pad, it seems so real I want to reach out and touch it.
Kavey

17 across.... BEACH
by karen_v

Comment:
I really like this, but finally realised after noticing I was tilting my head slightly that the water needs to be horizontal as it's the true horizon. It looks as though you've set horizon for a line between the line of the water and the line of the beach?
Really like the low low viewpoint you've taken to photograph this.
6, Kavey

Pencil Holder
by normw

Comment:
I feel it's pain (the tomatoe's)! Great composition and love the dribbles of juice and the stains and grains of tomato on the pencil tip. The background is appearing stripey to me?
7, Kavey

Reflection
by shedonist

Comment:
Original.
I like the reflection, though would prefer if it didn't include the garden chair and the bit of body at the right of the lens.
Also the hand or arm at the right spoils the line of the face.
5, Kavey

#2 Still Life
by shortredneck

Comment:
Like the ingredients but not the composition. The rich black background makes your photo look more professional. I want tips!
Kavey

MMMMM Good Pencil
by waltoml

Comment:
I am not keen on composition or cropping here - tip of pencil being missing, doesn't seem like a deliberate crop in that respect. Subject matter also not appealing to me. I do think that you've done a great job of getting the detail of the fur to come out so clearly. My scores are affected by the fact that pet photos don't generally appeal to me very often. Sorry!
Kavey

Prismacolors
by goodtimecharlee

Comment:
Beautiful abstract art, with nice lighting (glares not too strong) and nice angle on the diagonal.
6, Kavey

Pencil
by mscott821

Comment:
Takes me back in time. Great close up, nice composition, with some wonderful curves. Keeps my focus right inside the frame.
7, Kavey