Mortal Coil
by moodville

Comment:
Nice collection - a little too much shadow in the lower area of the larger image. Nice composition too.

Two Different Languages
by Annida

Comment:
Hi Da!
Can't read the text - it's just too dark on my monitor - well, I can if I get REALLY close to the screen but that's not too practical. I like the two images but the layout doesn't work for me - it doesn't feel balanced or deliberately composed.

Success
by rj324

Comment:
This is really interesting but I think it would be stronger with three more different poses, all in silhouette. Perhaps from left to right, with arms low, half way up and all the way raised? Or, if the model could manage it, the same pose with different sunset colours behind. I also think it might be stronger with black separators between the three images.

X-ray frames
by kiwiness

Comment:
This is very nicely done indeed. I've enjoyed really looking at this one in depth and think the way you've suggested that the image on the right is actually looking at the central image is very clever. The negative strip background definitely adds interest for me too. I think this is a winner and very commercial - I can see it on a promo postcard advertising underwear. If it's an original idea have you thought about sending it to some companies to suggest the idea for a future campaign?

Rolling waves
by agwright

Comment:
I know I sound like a parrot - and am wary after the recent comments in forum about repetitive comments - but I'm not at all keen on the different heights of images used here. Also, to me this is one photo cut into three - nothing wrong with that at all - it's like looking through a bay window - but I'm personally keener on entries where there are three seperate images used - images that support each other but are different. Just my two pence though!

Triptych Tulipiana
by Jak

Comment:
I like the images here and the different scales represented but am really not at all keen on the way the lower tulip is on it's side. That feels wrong to me.

Trumpet
by EJ

Comment:
Great images, nice lighting and good clean black background.
Layout doesn't work well for me - I'd prefer much more space above and below the trumpets and much less space between them horizontally.

Three Stages of Mr. Potato Head
by deckyon

Comment:
Sweet content!! She looks sad to have to pack up in the last one though!!
I'm not keen on the different height levels of the images.

Rite of Passage
by DougPaz

Comment:
Great idea and good colour and light. Choice of background colour just right. I would rather have the left and right images the same height as the central one. The white space behind just makes an odd and unappealing shape for me.

pacific skies
by lmhr

Comment:
In my opinion this montage would benefit strongly from gaps between the three images - using same colour and width as external border.