Surfacing
by oOWonderBreadOo

Comment:
Very creative idea in this photo. The shades of blue look great along with the random patterns of light they create. The model's body is significantly distorted by this, and I would prefer slighly less distortion. Good composition with the body along a diagonal.

Not too old to play with duckies
by kim5814

Comment:
Good humor in this shot, though it may not hold the interest of all viewers. The suds ontop of the head are a great accent. Decent focus and lighting, though my attention is never really captured by the shot.

Heliophile
by bicray

Comment:
I love the expression on the model's face, it looks quite comfortable. I think the hat hiding the eyes brings an interesting anonymity and mystery. The composition looks ok with the model perfectly centered, but leaves a slightly static feel.

bikini curve
by claudia26

Comment:
I like the concept of this shot. My only suggestion would be to move the model's side to one of the vertical 3rds lines. I think this would give the shot a more interesting balance. This crop creates an interesting abstract which I like.

BLING BLING
by mandyturner

Comment:
Good concept and lighting in this shot. I wish the belly button jewelry was out of the center, maybe at one of the intersections of horizontal and vertical 3rds. I think the inclusion of more black space on either the right or left would make this shot feel a little more dynamic.

Tangle
by pcody

Comment:
I like the shadows created by this lighting setup, though the pose looks a little uncomfortable. Good use of the strong diagonal and good tonal range.

The Puppeteer's Joy
by docpjv

Comment:
I think the pink ribbons are a good color to use for this shot. Desaturating everything but the ribbons might look cool too. I like the limp pose of the hands and head. The model's wet hair looks good, and I like the screen it creates introducing some anonymity.

divine freedom
by saintaugust

Comment:
I love the lighting in this shot. It really makes the model's skin look silky smooth. My only lighting suggestion would be to have a small reflector by the model's left foot softening the dark shadown under her left breast. Her facial expression is great, and her hands look good too. Good job.

Glimpse
by chele

Comment:
I really like the subtle tones going on in this shot. I normally like higher contrast, but I think this works well. Some might not like all the blown out areas on the model's skin, but I think it is quite interesting. I like her pose and facial expression. Her hair looks great too. Her hands look a little awkward, but are not a big deal.

Beauty From Within Itself
by SteveSee

Comment:
I like the pose of the model, though I think a second light source from the top left would help seperate her head from the black background and ease the harsh shadows a little. I think the colors look a little too contrasty; maybe the shot would look good in black and white too. Good composition and focus.