Untitled
by tomlewis1980

Comment:
something agelic about her - she's lovely but the image and the mood it evokes are outstanding - gorgeous 10

Descent
by Tarbini

Comment:
stunning - 10

Future Pilot
by Sonifo

Comment:
Exquisite - as always! 10

Flight of the Pigskin
by alanfreed

Comment:
I really like ths one - I like how all eyes are on the ball even though the crowd is blurred to create one mass of "crowd" I like the slight tilt which makes everyone lean right with the ball - it is going towards the right, isn't it? I like the regular splotches of color. hat-hat-hat...hand-haand-hand...yellow tag-tag-tag...face-face-face. I like the patterns they make. Although that ball is stationary, the patterns help to move it along. 8

"No Limits"
by vtruan

Comment:
I like the clean symetry of this shot. It takes the bird out of the animal kingdom and into the abstract. The shading of the sky around it is wonderful. 8

Gear Down, Flaps Out
by pinback

Comment:
This one made me laugh out loud, It looks like a study for an animated cartoon. Graceful aren;t they? I like your late afternnon light with the tinge of orange. I like the way you have avoided shadows. your fous is right one, the composition is a very nice rule of thirds with a lovely leading line, the wing span of one goose pointing towards the other who almost seems to be moving left to avoid getting hit, Your frontal view makes their heads look really smal, and seems to be a commentary on their brain size. I bet the splashdown was another good shot. 8

happy landing
by dc broughton

Comment:
Great action shot - A lot of power and movement, both in the dog and the wave. I like the off center composition, the crisp focus and the even lighting. I REALLY like his expectant face as he looks right at the camera. 7

Falling From Flight
by Shannon

Comment:
What if you had put the feather further down in the image? That would imply that it was falling. Your composition is too centered. An off center image is more interesting. 6

Flight of the Bumblebee
by sleekr

Comment:
You started with a clever concept - nice that it is not a bird or a plane. But your execution falls short. Actually I'm not sure what this is. THe folded paper plane had possibilites. I don't need to tell you that the focus is off, did you mean it to be? Is the lower sheet music supposed to be buzzing or something? Does it add to your composition?

Flight CRZeroNiner Leaving Runway B, Over.
by LucidLotus

Comment:
Well, you got something flying but that's about it. There isn't much else interesting about this image' It isn't quite in focus. That could be because the camera was trying to focus on something other than what you had in mind, autofocus is annoying like that. Or more likely this is slight camera shake. Learn to brace your camera against something or get a tripod. It is very hard to hand hold at the exposures that a digital camera allows us to use. Your lighting is off, by exposing for the shadow, you have over exposed for the background. It might be better not to include both shadow and bright sun. Also this harsh mid day sun is the most difficult and most unintersting lighting, Try shooting early morning or late afternoon when the light is better. Read the tutorial on the Rule of thirds - human nature, probably due to the biology of binocular vision, is drawn to the cross of the thirds lines. Notice what you have place at these points: ... Are those the most important visual items? Did you mean to emphasize them? Read the tutorial on the Rule of thirds - human nature, probably due to the biology of binocular vision, is drawn to the cross of the thirds lines. Notice what you have place at these points: ... Are those the most important visual items? Did you mean to emphasize them? Your bird is slightly off center, that is better than smack in the middle. What did you find captivating about this shot? Do you love it? Or are you just trying to enter any old thing.