Four Señoritas - Albuquerque NM Tricentennial
by jemison

Comment:
The lighting is way too harsh. Also, none of these girls look very happy. I don't blame them. I think maybe their hair is pulled way too tight! : ) Actually, I think the shadows are creating that illusion.

On The Move
by Shannon

Comment:
Little girls on the move need their feet. The desat is cute. The shadow on her face is pretty harsh.

On the lookout
by Brin

Comment:
Too dark IMO.

Jasmine in Orange
by debitipton

Comment:
Jasmine is beautiful. I think the almost white background on the left detracts from the shot a bit. I think a bit more of the head dress showing on that side to frame in her face, and a black or darker background would improve the shot. Also, a bit more light in the eyes to really make the catchlight and lashes sparkle. I also think a bit more space under her face would help it look less crowded in the frame. The skin tone and the choice of color for her are great. She looks almost golden. Wow what a thought, she would make an amazing art shot with gold body pant on her skin.

The Nomad's City Garden
by Imagineer

Comment:
Is that Robin Williams? What was that movie . . . Fisher King?

Love is Ageless
by joyinlight

Comment:
Nice composition, but the image is way overprocessed. I am sure the baby is very soft without processing. The treatment takes away from the elderly arm by smoothing out the lines too much. Great eyes and imagination. I would try this one again.

Zac Johnson
by jmsetzler

Comment:
This shot shows great character in the subject. I am really bothered by the glasses cutting through the eyes. I think a bit lower angle would have made this perfect.

Waiting
by MichaelC

Comment:
Well, nothing like a bullseye between breasts to get the guys attention. I think the colors work well with the subject and the light is nice. I think it needed to be cropped much closer. The wall is overpowering the subject. The pose (missing arms) seems a bit strange to me as well. She is very beautiful, and the tilt of her head really shows off the shap of her face and jawline. Good work overall.

A Portrait of An Artist
by librodo

Comment:
This looks like Librodos work. The shot is very moving and tells the story of the stereotypical troubled artist. The light is, of course, amazing and the way the detail of the background patterns and the pieces of tatoo come together is amazing. Excellent.

strollers
by coolhar

Comment:
I like what you have done with the bright sunlight in this shot. I bet a shot of the little girl alone would have been nice as well. Maybe a bit less busy, but this is a good shot.