Yellow Tortex
by langdon

Comment:
Liked the angle you shoot, right bottom corner seems slightly dark. I can see a harsh shadow there and the guitar color and background color look blended. Change the background color I think to leave it completely black. Test how the picture looks in a very closer shoot. I think a macro shot will give the picture more depth.

Press One
by langdon

Comment:
Nice shot, but there is no wow factor on behalf of me here since this type of image is completed to death on DPC. I originally gave you a 5, but on second look i can not really justify that compared to the competition so bumping you up to a 6

Speedy Fire
by langdon

Comment:
Liked your concept and composition. Look like a toothbrush is burning. The flame is looking as like as its real form. Nice macro shot with great clarity.

Control
by langdon

Comment:
Excellent clarity, lighting set up and depth of field but I think it would has been better if you could replace the spinner a bit of down.

Sharon
by langdon

Comment:
I think her expression is just perfect. Looking professional model in front of the camera though I am not sure she is professional model or not. No tense on face at all.

Sharon
by langdon

Comment:
I think her expression is just perfect. Looking professional model in front of the camera though I am not sure she is professional model or not. No tense on face at all.