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| 10/03/2004 08:15:14 PM |
Graceful Departureby connieComment: Strong points: Super, super, sky - the perfect time of day, The shoreline, as a leading line from the bottom right, leads well into the frame (but it does lead the viewer right back out on the left.) The "god beams" through the clouds are spectacular. Exposure = perfect.
Suggestions for improvement: There appears to be vignetting at both top corners - a bit unnatural. |
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| 10/03/2004 08:07:57 PM |
Interludeby PedroComment: Strong Points: You've captured what appears to be a very candid image and made it into an emotional work of art. The printing is flawless with strong blacks and whites - and plenty of grays in the pallette as well. The aperture chosen blurred the background just enough to get a hint of what's back there without causing distractions. Suggestions for improvement.: The composition could be a bit better if you had taken a step or so to the left. Then you could remove the vertical metal area behind the musicians back and perhaps get more of his back. I'd also like to see his tip case all in the frame. Overall - an exceptional shot - thanks for sharing. |
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| 10/03/2004 07:59:57 PM |
Solitudeby p_johnsComment: Strong points: a) The sky is total wow. b) Exposure is perfect c) Colors and black silhoouettes couldn't be better. Suggestions for improvement: a) The figure at the top of the mound is dead center - may be stronger if the camera was moved a bit to the left (although it's still excellent in this formal presentation.) b) May be just a bit too much base - but I would not take off more than 1/3 of the dark area. |
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| 10/03/2004 07:55:56 PM |
First Lightby autoolComment: Strong points: a) The leading line of the sand on the shore line coming in from the bottom left with the footprints in the sand is superb. I would however like just a bit more space where it curves back to the left - it's almost a merger with the edge of the frame. b) The patterns of ripples in the forground water are great. c) Exposure is right on - even with the bright area at the left horizon. Suggestions for improvement: If this shot was taken a few minutes earlier - the light may have been spectacular.
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| 10/03/2004 02:30:59 PM |
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| 10/03/2004 02:29:42 PM |
Effervescenceby CODEComment: Oh my - so welll done. My second or so challenge was the same technique. I hope you don't get beat about the way I was. I was accused of stealing, being unimaginative and nearly inhuman! The introducion of the yellow color is a great touch. I hope you do well - good luck. |
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| 10/03/2004 02:26:56 PM |
Second City by kirbicComment: 100 PERFECT time of day for this magic scene. If you don't ribbon - I will be amazed. Congratulations. |
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| 10/03/2004 02:25:41 PM |
The Courthouseby MarjoComment: Full of WOW! You did it all right - superb composition, perfect exposure, and inspired selection of subject. I hear the ribbon train coming in your direction. |
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| 10/03/2004 01:51:02 PM |
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| 10/03/2004 01:49:38 PM |
Slot Canyon by ArtifactsComment: Antelope Canyon near Page I presume - an awesome location. The long exposure is pefect and stable. Composition works well too. |
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