Never a Day Without Charmin
by wwwavenger

Comment:
Bonus points for the good concept. Pretty nice execution: reasonably sharp across the image, but you need to set the white balance when you shoot or use your editing program to remove the red tungsten-light cast.

Ice cold, Stella Artoise
by Pixelstate

Comment:
Reasonably nice shot, I like the design and long shutter is nice for the flowing look of the beer, but the image is generally flat, and there' slots of noise in the background. There's no "E" in Stella Artoris. Almost there, need work on the technical aspects.

'Stypens' - For Stylish Writers
by DianaB

Comment:
Crisp focus on the entire product, good. Nicely designed framing, good. Pretty significantly overhsharpened, not so good.

Just Say No (The DPC Addiction)
by vonautsch

Comment:
Is your client selling flowers? DNMC.

Heaven Scent
by peecee

Comment:
Outstanding sharpness over the whole product, and the background supports rather than distracts from the concept. I would have liked to seen more background around the product, without the little triangle.

Lindsay Olive - A Tradition of Quality
by bledford

Comment:
Beautiful shot, but the product isn't the "center of attention", and the upper edge of the label is out of focus. For advertising, the props must support the product, not the other way around.

The Yellow Pages. Let your fingers do the walking.
by zeke123ca

Comment:
the plant (?) in the background is very distracting, and doesn't add to the message -- had the background been out-of-place (for example in front of a auto dealer) and conveying the message of WHERE the yellow pages will walk you to, it would support the message.

The Meeting House- Visit Hale Farm and Village, Bath, Ohio
by STEINR

Comment:
I understand that you're trying to create a dramatic foreground/background contrast, but the tree completely obscures the subject of the photo.

Candle Lit
by DianaB

Comment:
Hey there -- I know voting is closed, and enough people ragged on the focus, so I won't mention that. ;) Anyway, here's a tip; photography is about light, so think about how light travels, how it changes when it strikes object, and -- here's the suggestion for this shot -- how it travels through things. The oil bottle might have been stunning if it were lit from behind.

lay down your tracks
by Pixelprose

Comment:
cool idea, but marred by a couple of technical details: the frog (the real name of that wedge thing in the middle) isn't centered -- cropping in photoshop would have been totally appropriate; the sky is almost completely blown out as is the rail on the right; and I might suggest a little more saturation in Pshop as some was lost due to the over-exposure. A potentially very nice shot.