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Challenge: Advertisement Revisited (Basic Editing I)
Camera: Fujifilm FinePix S602Z
Location: Home
Date: Jul 5, 2004
Aperture: F 8
ISO: 160
Shutter: 1/111
Galleries: Macro, Advertisement
Date Uploaded: Jul 6, 2004

Crop/levels/huesat/bright/contrast/NI/Unsharpmask
borders and resize.
Would have loved to clone the imperfections out.
Intended reshooting but the weather refused.

Statistics
Place: 11 out of 218
Avg (all users): 6.3223
Avg (commenters): 6.9130
Avg (participants): 6.2475
Avg (non-participants): 6.3600
Views since voting: 1334
Views during voting: 413
Votes: 301
Comments: 27
Favorites: 0


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AuthorThread
07/19/2004 08:29:55 AM
Thanks everyone for the comments, if advanced editing was allowed I would have cleaned away the items commented on, hoped to reshoot but the weather was against me.
Thanks again,
Paul.
 Comments Made During the Challenge
07/13/2004 11:27:25 PM
That little bit of frame on the bottom left distracts from an otherwise great image! The clouds cross the bottle nicely.
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07/13/2004 01:58:20 AM
the bottle should have been full....
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07/12/2004 08:05:37 PM
Ahhh, nearly perfect...if it couldn't be completely full, maybe it should have been completely empty?
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07/12/2004 03:49:19 PM
This is pretty. I'd have given it a higher score if that dark thing hadn't been in the bottom left corner.
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07/12/2004 11:57:03 AM
Nice effect, marked down for reflection, weird dots under bottle, and dark mark on bottom left corner. 8 for the nice try.
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07/12/2004 07:33:29 AM
Nice colors and focus, is it a bottle on a mirror?
Was it possible to shoot again the photo taking away the bottom-left corner? And making the bottle completely full?
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07/11/2004 12:01:48 PM
very effective, label is very clear
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07/11/2004 11:47:04 AM
i have been staring at this picture for a while and I can't seem to figure out how you did it. Just to nit pic, there is a grayish spot in the bottom left hand corner that doesn't help, nut once again thats just me nit picing. I am going to vote an 8.
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07/11/2004 10:47:48 AM
Good effect and good lighting.
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07/11/2004 09:05:43 AM
good concept and detail -- the dark area in the lower left is a little distracting. otherwise, good photo. )
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07/11/2004 01:49:57 AM
This is a great shot but there are a couple things that could have made it a little better. The first would have been hard to overcome but the slight reflection of the spray bottle is a bit distracting. The other thing I would have avoided if possible is the distraction in the lower left corner of the photo... other than that, perfect.
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07/11/2004 12:57:01 AM
This looks great. I'm looking forward to finding out how you got this photo. Well Done!
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07/10/2004 12:13:16 AM
Clear, crisp shot. This jumps out at you. The only thing I would recommend is to clone out the little triangle at the bottom left corner.
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07/09/2004 11:25:48 AM
Too bad about the house shown at bottom left of the screen. Otherwise great shot.
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07/08/2004 09:06:54 PM
Too bad you couldn't crop that bottom corner. Otherwise a nice, clear ad, good color and sharpness. Would have helped if the bottle was full :)
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07/08/2004 09:02:31 PM
Outstanding sharpness over the whole product, and the background supports rather than distracts from the concept. I would have liked to seen more background around the product, without the little triangle.
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07/08/2004 08:34:12 PM
The little... uhh.. thing... in the bottom right corner is kind of disturbing. Other than that, this is actually one of my favorites in the entire challenge. It really strikes me and makes me want to buy some! hehe.. nice work!
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07/08/2004 05:54:59 PM
this would be perfect if there wasnt the cut off edge on the bottom left hand corner. Very beautiful colors and nice picture overall.
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07/08/2004 12:45:36 PM
Great shot, the bottom left corner is distracting tho.
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07/08/2004 12:33:58 PM
I'm seeing a reflection of the bottle on the 'clouds'. Also, there is a blurry triangle patch in the lower right corner. Not a bad effort.
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07/08/2004 11:33:00 AM
The diagonal comp is quite difficult to pull off. It clearly works to show all the product, but I normally expect the diagonal element to somehow emphasize some element of the photo. In this case the background above and below aren't distinguished in any way. So it weakens the composition a bit.
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07/07/2004 05:24:39 PM
Good image.
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07/07/2004 03:40:51 PM
Good Idea of Mirror
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07/07/2004 02:01:29 PM
Wow, very nice shot.

I would like to see how this was done, I can't even begin to guess. Wait a minute, it looks like you might have suction-cupped or otherwise glued this to a windoe. Ingenious.

I like the focus, I like the composition.
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07/07/2004 01:35:23 PM
Whatever is in the lower left hand corner is the ONLY thing I see that I would change...great photo!!
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07/07/2004 08:34:38 AM
Cute title and nice, clear image. It seems like there's a reflection to the bottom right of the bottle. This would also be a better image if the bottle were full, but I know you didn't want to top it off with water. ;-) But still, very nice shot.
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