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| 05/26/2015 05:31:14 PM |
The Salt Pond by markwileyComment: A bit more of that spectacular crepuscular light in the upper right would not have been a bad idea, but this is one of the best images in the challenge thus far, its just that the top feels a bit squeezed. |
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| 05/26/2015 05:27:04 PM |
My landby hajekaComment: I like the colors and the environment, but I keep looking for the big thing in the image and the only candidate is the high tension line in the distance. Using that fence line in the mid distance might have worked with different framing. I like the feeling of a big quite place, but I keep hunting for the unifying element. |
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| 05/21/2015 06:17:58 PM |
Lostby DCrest01Comment: Glorious light with interesting asymmetry. I like the blues and the yellows with that hint of pink at the ceiling. It reminds me of the work of Robert Irwin.
My one quibble is the skewed roof beam. It would have made a more pleasing image (for me alone perhaps) had you skewed the image to justify that beam and the side walls from keystoned,into perfect symmetry to allow the walls and the decayed roof to be the only things out of balance. It is pretty easy to do and legal in this rule set, and the sort of edit that would have stilled the image into a pure exploration of light |
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| 05/21/2015 06:09:37 PM |
they made a living here, years agoby jmritzComment: I like the brooding tone and I see why you have the big branch in the upper right to lead in the eye, but I think the structure is playing second fiddle to the foliage. More house being swallowed less trees doing the swallowing might have been stronger. those fleck of white trash in the foreground and in the tree are bothersome; pick them up, burn them down a bit or toss in more to make them a theme, all would have worked, but as they are they are distractions. |
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| 05/21/2015 06:05:04 PM |
Village Interruptedby LindaLeeComment: Im of two minds here. I like the highly stylized approach of heavy frame and subtle hues, yet this is such a great find for the challenge that I wonder if you didn't give up too much in the textures and richness of tones to get that effect. I would love to see some outtakes of this set with a more documentary approach perhaps with a more burnt in brooding sky rather than the wash of empty we see here. |
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| 05/21/2015 06:01:06 PM |
Bound and Brokenby markwileyComment: Elegant, subtle and minimal. The contrast in textures between the rope and all the hard surfaces really works here. |
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| 05/21/2015 05:59:35 PM |
Open Houseby MargaretNetComment: Gloriously found, framed and captured. But for me, some of the magic spilled away in your editing. The pastel hues and lack of a true black, take some of the brooding mystery of the subject matter and spill it away into the land of tone mapped blah. Sure you get all the details in the shadows, but you give up so much, including, I expect, the blue ribbon. Still my second favorite, but it could have been the clear winner.
Coming back to praise rather than carp about what isn't there. I truly love the way the eye is lead through the frame. The spiral from the glove, through the bedding across the chair, desk and out into the explosion of destruction and decay is just lovely. |
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| 05/21/2015 02:39:51 AM |
window to the pastby tangueraComment: This is not A BUILDING. Never the less it is my favorite photograph in the challenge, but I wonder how often it will get knocked for my first point. the light and the editing are just lovely, well seen. |
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| 05/09/2015 03:52:02 PM |
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| 04/29/2015 03:27:19 PM |
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