|It would be really nice to see this on the front page. Compositionally it is top notch: finely balanced, strong leading lines, well lit, nicely processed, tack sharp. Just superb technical work.
Where it goes wrong with me, personally, is the lack of pathos. It is clearly an abandoned, neglected building but there is nothing there to wrench the heart. For me, it is simply too sterile.
Don't misunderstand, were I voting, this would be a nine from me simply on technical merits. Quite sincerely, I hope this ribbons for you. Best of luck.