What Have I Done?
by eyesightphoto

Comment:
Nice mood set by the lighting. Wish the foreground was a bit crisper and the head was a bit more isolated from the body.

Animated Suspension
by flip89

Comment:
Great idea. There's just too many swings for me. I know it would have been almost too much work, but cloning out the empty swings and the child that overlaps behind the other and this would be a really cool pic.

In the Dark
by SJCarter

Comment:
Very Interesting. Would have liked more separation between the hand and body. Maybe had him touching his forehead as if in thought.

Eye Glass
by Matthew

Comment:
I like this. I can't help but wonder if it could be improved by removing the left object that seems a bit distracting. Perhaps replacing it with a thick black border.

A long long time ago...
by DefyTime

Comment:
Really like the legs, wish the light was stronger to include more contrast through to the top of your head. Maybe neat image or gaus blur could help the background look less like an apartment wall.

At Last Light
by Pedro

Comment:
Nice perspective. Too bad the second horse was directly behind the first

National Icon
by redmoon

Comment:
don't know if it was possible, but I would have liked more detail in the left spans. Perhaps moving up or down the river would have removed the background shoreline.

Night Train
by kevrobertson

Comment:
Stand out shot. Just wish you had set up on the other side of the slats and given a bit more dark sky above the umbrella.

Off Center
by graphicfunk

Comment:
Mr. Funk, Your work is usually very intriguing and obviously very stylized. Not that I'm any one to concern yourself with but I generally really like it or I really don't. In this case it feels too static or staged for the action presented, unlike your "Sore Loser" where you conveyed action in stopped motion to perfection. Perhaps spreading the fragments out a bit more or adding some more angle to the broken off piece would jazz things up. I'll shut up now as you get your 6+, which seems to easily elude me. Apparently I have way too much time on my hands tonight...the little sliver to the right seems hard to avoid. If you aren't who I thought and this is a real karate chop, I apologize, and I'll quietly go back to watching late night infomercials instead of making stupid comments.

Thrust
by aznym

Comment:
The expressions of the onlookers makes this a masterpiece, but perhaps you already knew that. -10