Food Trucks
by primabarbara

Comment by insteps:
There is a story here but I'm not feeling it. The individual photographs are fine but they aren't holding my attention. I enjoy your work so don't take this critique personally. Side challenges are about us growing together. Learning from our analysis as much as what we capture and create.

Message edited by author 2016-09-04 11:51:42.

DSCF4530
by primabarbara

Comment by insteps:
I like the idea but the last image is probably my least favorite of the set. The first and last images are arguably the most important for a photo essay. Maybe end with a picture, taken outside your house, with illuminated windows? I'd also like a few more to set the mood. That kitchen shot with a slice of light is fabulous.

edit: oops posted this on your last image.

Message edited by author 2016-09-04 11:30:16.

Kanu 2
by primabarbara

Comment by insteps:
Gorgeous place! Who wouldn’t enjoy a day on this pristine lake.

Nice collection of memories without being redundant. Such a lovely palette of blues. I like how you presented different perspectives, from landscapes to dripping paddles. I also enjoyed your your last image, leaving the lake with your canoe pointing home.

Some of the close up studies seem a little out of focus. Were these an afterthoughts that you cropped?

launching base
by primabarbara

Comment by tanguera:
The Starship Enterprise :)

long distance relationship
by primabarbara

Comment by ecmguy:
I'd love to read your notes on how you captured this. Just great.

launching base
by primabarbara

Comment by Ja-9:
I don't think that I'd stand in the center of that thing!!! Beam me up Scottie!!!

Ascent of Mt. Consumption
by primabarbara

Comment by Ja-9:
This is just wonky to look at...I know it's the lens and I try to like these pictures...I really try...

I can not resist golden chocolates
by primabarbara

Comment by illini75:
Me either

This place is like somebody's memory of a town, and the memory is fading ...
by primabarbara

Comment by clickodak:
Congratulations on the Top Ten. Very artistic composition

This place is like somebody's memory of a town, and the memory is fading ...
by primabarbara

Comment by Neat:
Turned out really well, handsome son!