The joys in life are so simple.
by tolovemoon

Comment by Alexys:
This image is too dark. You need a better lighting, and more contrast. I´m sorry, but I think it will be scored low.

The joys in life are so simple.
by tolovemoon

Comment by L2:
This shot would have worked better if the candle on the piano wasn't dead center. Because it is so light against the rest of the frame, it becomes the focal point and throws off the overall composition. Overall, the shot is very dark. Concept is decent, technique could be better.

The joys in life are so simple.
by tolovemoon

Comment by jose3032:
Too dark. out of focus

Pink is Miss Froggy's favorite color in the garden!
by tolovemoon

Comment by tolovemoon:
The more I look at it the more I may have to use these frogs in the spring outdoors.... I see where the busy and cluttered come in abd thats the backdrop....

The joys in life are so simple.
by tolovemoon

Comment by slipintoshadows:
Bit too dark... intriguing picture though.

The out door shot with natural light.
by tolovemoon

Comment by dsb_mac:
I think this is the best one of the series. There's a couple of things that would make this top notch. Move the red guitar over to the left a bit so that it's in between the strings of the guitar in behind and the glass one in front. Don't change the angle of the guitar strings on any of the guitars. They're good. The other thing is the reflection on the blue background guitar. You'll notice that there are streaks in the blue. This is because the guitar is reflecting the image of something in front of it. How you fix it is you hold something like a sheet or piece of cardboard in front and then you'll get an even color in your blue background guitar. The sheet could be white or black I'm not sure which would look better.

Music Collectibles
by tolovemoon

Comment by dsb_mac:
this one's good. The focus nice on the red guitar is nice. Maybe if the string bar on the blue guitar behind it was visible like in your other pics it might make it better. The two guitars in front would be better probably if they were a bit closer together. It would be a tighter composition. I think this is my 2nd favorite of the series. These are definite improvements on the entry shot.

Message edited by author 2005-02-13 16:15:16.

Pink is Miss Froggy's favorite color in the garden!
by tolovemoon

Comment by casualguy:
Very busy photo, focal point hard to discern.

Miami!
by tolovemoon

Comment by RulerZigzag:
Lets go JETS !!...good photo though

The View
by tolovemoon

Comment by RulerZigzag:
this is very nice...and would of been better if it was noiseless