Tragedy
by ytshuva

Comment by knowvak:
I'm very sorry but I can not find the "Transparency" connection in this one.

Tragedy
by ytshuva

Comment by moviealien:
nice idea but there is no transparency here.

Tragedy
by ytshuva

Comment by lawrysimm:
A great photograph, but not sure how it fits transparency?

Tragedy
by ytshuva

Comment by Lutchenko:
Nice shot but I'm struggling to see how it meets the challenge

Tragedy
by ytshuva

Comment by snakurinn:
Love the concept but I can´t see the transperancy theme

Tragedy
by ytshuva

Comment by Art Roflmao:
THIS was NO accident! >:/

Tragedy
by ytshuva

Comment by kelvinyam:
Beautifully set up. However I can't link this to transparency.

Tragedy
by ytshuva

Comment by aliqui:
That certainly is a tragedy. I fail to see the Transparency though.

05:45am sunrise
by ytshuva

Comment by salmiakki:
Greetings from the Critique Club

I think the score you received is probably around about right for this shot. This is indeed a beautiful sunrise, however, there are a number of things that could have improved the score quite easily.

The extreme shadows in the foreground do actually hurt this one a little bit. If the foreground was slightly lighter the viewer would be able to put the excellent leading line more into context. Right now it looks a little out of place.

Composition: if you had perhaps taken a few steps to the right so the subject was more to the left of the frame you could have made better use of the leading line. Also, to my eye the horizon looks like it is right in the middle of the photo. I think including a little bit more of the sky may have helped this.

Overall a very nice sunrise photo that potentially could have scored a little higher with some additional editing.

Sarah

you'll get your share at the end of the day.
by ytshuva

Comment by Rainbow-Coloured-Soul:
Good set up. Good shot. Not sure the before and after message is clear enough in terms of fitting with your title.