Eyesby
banmornComment by BMacD: Hi! Here’s a comment from the Critique Club.
First Impression:
Busy! Eyes dropped to the large water drop front and centre, up to the dark area near the top, around to the left, back to the front water drop.
Composition:
I feel it’s too busy, with too much out of focus. The black areas on the screen are distracting in the bifocals as well as in the water drops. I like the colours.
My eyes kept following the glasses frame around, looking for what was in focus.
Subject:
Clever use of bifocals and feathers. Meets challenge. Speed voters may have had trouble!
Technical:
Find DOF too shallow. If you could have brought the frame and some water drops in focus, your picture would have really “popped”
Thanks for your comments describing what you did pre and post. Gives me a much better idea what your intentions were.
Sorry, I don’t understand your reference to RainX
Summary:
Congratulations on your 76% placement, and getting a score above your average.